Question

Drifting

Answer 1

Drifting

Sometimes I sit around and think
What life would be
If I loved you
And you never thought of me
If our roles were switched
And life had changed
Would we still be together, in the same way?
What if you loved me, even more than you do?
What if what we have now, will change very soon
What if we drift apart, and never talk again
What if our love, is just like the rain
It comes and goes and never stays for long
And something tells me, everything’s going to go wrong
One day, in a matter of time
You’ll have your life, and I’ll have mine
You’ll leave me just like everyone else
Once again I’ll have to go back to telling myself,
It was all a lie; your love was never true
But damn it what do I do
You convinced me you actually cared
You hugged me when I was scared
You loved me like no one else
And I wish I could let myself
Love you the way you love me
But I'm scared to let you see
To let you into my inner thoughts
But somehow, with my heart you caught
You showed me a new side of me
But please don’t let me become
Just another memory.

Answer 2

Really good, I love it!

Answer 3

Thank you!!!

Answer 4

That's amazing hun! you're soo talented! keep up the good work!!! <3 Love youuuuuuuu

Answer 5

Thank you!!!!!! <3

Answer 6

It's really good.

Answer 7

Amazing!

Answer 8

This is amazing. :)

Answer 9

Thank you guys!!!

Answer 10

welcome :)

Answer 11

Wow....this is amazing! I would LOVE to see more of your work :) I, too, write poetry and songs and I’m my biggest critic...lol but you seem to have a lot of confidence in your work

Answer 12

This is fairly good, but my advice would be to not be too concerned about making each line rhyme/forcing a rhyme. It doesn't need to rhyme to be good or poetic. Perhaps using creative adjectives or wording phrases in ways that aren't exactly literal would improve?

Answer 13

This isnt amazeing...or wonderful...or awesome...ITS CREATIVE, AND ARTFUL...FULL OF PASSION, LOVE, LIFE, HURT.....GOOD JOB

Answer 14

REALLY, YOU ARE MORE THAN THOSE SMALL WORDS...YOUR AN ARTIST

Answer 15

I wish I was just as talented as you.....your lucky

Answer 16

hehehe well thanks!!!! and i'm sure you could be

Answer 17

and @TedBunny Rhyming is just a horrible habit of mine.

Answer 18

Hey, I have to go to bed....but I will be back on O.S monday for sure...Wow, ur so lucky......bye now