Question

Two poems
Its hard to be true to yourself and your Country.
True to your family
Your friends.
True to everyone, on both ends.

But today, is the day you show what you are.
Break through those thick emotional bars.
Show people the real you;
Show them that you can be true.


The second one is lower down

Answer 1

@Jumperman @katie234 @dan815 @tester97

Answer 2

....those are good did you make them or what?

Answer 3

I wrote them myself, yes. Thank you :) do you have any ideas or pointers?

Answer 4

not really i think they are really good :)

Answer 5

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read over them

Answer 6

>be me
>be tagged on OS
>see post
>longer than 4 lines
>too much reads
>not going to read
>give medal
>move on
>get ate by unicorn dragon

Answer 7

o-o oook

Answer 8

......dont listen to that poo poo head

Answer 9

xD
ok

Answer 10

You sure you don't have any pointers or Ideas?

Answer 11

Tester, you typed something that was over 4 lines

Answer 12

I only read this part

So sharpen your sword;
Break of the rust.
Chant your song, stomp off the dust.

For today we fight again;
In this bloody sand.

^^^^^^^^^^
i like that it speaks to me on a religious level believe it or not. Break of the rust? shouldnt it be break off?

Answer 13

ohh yes, sorry. My apologies

Answer 14

And, what is your religion?

Answer 15

Hold on, I am going to delete that and edit it again

Answer 16

Ok :) my religion? you dont want to get into that wolf trust me ^_^

Answer 17

Oh please, entertain me.

Answer 18

One final stand.
Here, in the bloodied sand

For those who have fallen;
Those brave men who have given their lives

Here, in the dust we will sharpen our swords;
And break off the rust.

For here and now; the enemy is approaching
And here, we stand forever hoping.

But one thing is for sure.
I will fight.
I will fight this battle day and night.

For life is not over after the first mistake;
Or the first heartbreak.
After every darkness, there will be daybreak.

So all of those, who are in need
Take my hand; and I will lead.

So sharpen your sword;
Break off the rust.
Chant your song, stomp off the dust.

For today we fight again;
In this bloody sand.

Answer 19

We don't have to talk about it if it reached outside your comfort zone

Answer 20

@anonymous_user

Answer 21

Oh no its not but its just that most people dont really care about it

Answer 22

Message me about it

Answer 23

o tay :)

Answer 24

give me a minute though

Answer 25

@tanya123

Answer 26

This is cool! :P

Answer 27

Thank you :) do you have any good pointers,tips, and or Ideas?

Answer 28

If you want to post more poems go to the (Writing Section)

Answer 29

ohh yeaahhhh I totes forgot about that XD my apologies

Answer 30

Wow, well-written!! you sure a polish writer...! I love poems that rhyme (:

This verse is beautiful "So all of those, who are in need
Take my hand; and I will lead."

Has a pretty clear idea of what you're poem-ing about. Great job Wolf!!!

And yeah, Thanks for sharing!

Answer 31

:O :D Thankk yewwww :) xD

Answer 32

Yes, try to rhyme a bit more and use expressive words but so far you've done very well! how long have you been writing

Answer 33

Personally, my favorite part is
"So sharpen your sword;
Break off the rust.
Chant your song, stomp off the dust."
I like it because it is a creative way of saying to get back up. (Which I have ALOT of experience with, life tends to enjoy messing with you :P
I have been writing since third grade and for a very long time. I am currently writing a book. Also, I wrote down these two poems rather quickly because they came into mind rather quickly and at awkward timing. Thank ou for your input. I will definitely go over it and add some adjustments.

Answer 34

Yes, I totally agree! Great job! Keep up the great work and good luck c:

Answer 35

Thank you :D

Answer 36

i didnt see anything about bacon... F-!!!