Question

3. What judgment would you make about Romeo’s plan to be with Juliet?

Answer 1

@Abhisar

Answer 2

I wouldn't make any judgments, honestly ..!

Answer 3

He loved her and she loved him, that's it.

Answer 4

Or you mean the plan to make an appearance of her death ?

Answer 5

thats what i was thinking lol but i didnt know what to write for it

Answer 6

The plan is to make her appear death? It was a risky and not the best plan I should say -:(

Answer 7

(some people call it ) Dies to live

Answer 8

he didnt know about that plan remember? that was friar Laurence's plan

Answer 9

i guess it was just for them to be together not for her to take the poison that made her appear dead.

Answer 10

right, that is the irony that HE didn't know that she only appeared dead.

Answer 11

yea lol this is what i wrote. tell me if it sounds okay

Answer 12

I honestly couldn’t make any judgments. They were in love and wanted to be together. And they couldn’t just announce that they were together because of the feud happening between their families.

Answer 13

You CAN make a judgement about the PROs and CONs of a plan. I mean how good was it as a PLAN ?

Answer 14

well it wasnt that good of a plan

Answer 15

Yes, I agree. They didn't warn Romeo, and even if they did it would have still been a huge risk. They should have (perhaps) just escaped together.

Answer 16

Thanks for the help

Answer 17

@SolomonZelman how does this sound?---- I honestly couldn’t make any judgments on why they went through with the plan. They were in love and wanted to be together. And they couldn’t just announce that they were together because of the feud happening between their families. However I can make a judgment on what happened. They didn't warn Romeo about her taking the poison that simulated death, and even if they did it would have still been a huge risk. They should have just escaped together while they had the chance.

Answer 18

You are getting the point, but starting the paragraph from "I honestly couldn’t make any judgments" is not convincing enough.

Answer 19

what would be a good way to start it?

Answer 20

You can drop the first sentence.

Answer 21

I am not a writer, and can't really advise. But preferably,

don't start the sentence with "and" "but" or other conjunction.

you got a normal vocabulary.

That is it, pretty much

Answer 22

so is this better------------- They were in love and wanted to be together. They also couldn’t just announce that they were together because of the feud happening between their families. However I can make a judgment on what happened. They didn't warn Romeo about her taking the poison that simulated death, and even if they did it would have still been a huge risk. They should have just escaped together while they had the chance

Answer 23

They were in love and wanted to be together. However, they couldn't announce that they were together because of the feud happening between their families. When it comes to the plan, although it was creative, they didn't think of all possible consequences, since they didn't warn Romeo that the poison is only simulating the death. In my opinion, the plan would have been very risky even after warning Romeo, because if Romeo delayed digging her out for whatever reason, she would actually die. They should have escaped together when they had the chance.


perhaps like this

Answer 24

thank you

Answer 25

yw