Question

"....but I hope he’s smiling down at me as I experience the good and the bad times"

How could I make this sentence better? Its about my father passing away and I want this reworded

Answer 1

has yur really father gone ???

Answer 2

it is seem to me best

Answer 3

"...but I hope he’s smiling down at me with joy as I undertake the good and bad times."

Answer 4

last one is better than it

Answer 5

sorry
kelly

Answer 6

"..but I hope he’s smiling down at me with joy throughout all my endeavors" or this one?

Answer 7

thank you

Answer 8

first one is best among these
and sorry
idk that yur father is passed away

Answer 9

in the starting say that ALL the people who come in the world one day they will go from this world
and we can never bring them again

MAY GOD will give him blessing and put him into the paradise