Question

sentence structure.. help

Answer 1

Ever since I was a young kid, I would see a man who lived at the edge of my block working all day

Answer 2

how do i get rid of the was and replace them with stronger verbs

Answer 3

and correct my grammar

Answer 4

You could do something like this:
Ever since the days of my early youth, I have observed a man who lived just down the block, and what I saw was that he worked hard each and every day.

Answer 5

amazing

Answer 6

Or you could change that a little, and do this:
Ever since the days of my early youth, I watched a man who lived just down the block from me, and I would observe his incredible efforts he exerted towards his work.

Answer 7

Something like those would work. You can change it up however you desire and you should still get the same idea. (:

Answer 8

Did I help? Or do you still need more ideas? (:

Answer 9

yes it did are you willing to read my body paragraph??

Answer 10

Ever since the days of my early youth, I have observed a man who lived just down the block, and what I saw was that he worked hard each and every day. His regular day consisted of his day job and then some side projects which he worked on the evenings. The man seemed to have no family since he was the only person coming in and out of his house. He looked like a fair man, living with only the basic necessities. You could tell how simple his lifestyle was by looking through his windows. The house was vaguely furnished and would only serve as a home when he returned from his jobs. Nevertheless the man was mysterious. He wasn't a sociable guy; therefore almost no one knew anything about him. All I knew about him was that he looked like a mechanic or plumber. He always had the same blue like uniform.

Answer 11

this essay is a profile essay

Answer 12

It looks good, but at the very end, you should add a dash between the words "blue" and "like", to make "blue-like".
Otherwise, it looks great!

\(\Large\mathbb{\color{lime}{\bigstar~GREAT~WORK!~\bigstar}}\)

Answer 13

thanks