Question

Hi all, i need help with a poetry writing. The teacher said we are going to write our own canterbury tale. I wrote most of it already, just need 2 closing line to make the poetry sounds complete.


This is the stuff i wrote, need 2 closing line at the end: Riding on the path to the holy land, Scratching the landscape with my calloused hand, Routing the way to the hug of God, Spreading the spirit abroad, People keep a distance from me, Because of the messiest surcoat they have seen. While drawing, I am quiet as drowned in my world, No one can pull me out from the swirl, It is painful to stay

Answer 1

hmm

Answer 2

Riding on the path to the holy land,
Scratching the landscape with my calloused hand,
Routing the way to the hug of God,
Spreading the spirit abroad,
People keep a distance from me,
Because of the messiest surcoat they have seen.
While drawing, I am quiet as drowned in my world,
No one can pull me out from the swirl,
It is painful to stay in the carriage,
A flow of perfume scents like sludge,
I am proud of who I am, what I do
Contributing to the kingdom for sure,
I am the guide that leads to victories,
By the landmark drew in my piece,
To reveal enemies hidden in the tree,
Conquer new land discovered oversea,
By bolden the boundary along the kingdom,
To prevent people be the innocent victim.

Answer 3

yes? stefrheart?

Answer 4

How would you like to end it?

Answer 5

the general idea is, "This is my destiny of what i am doing, i hope god will help my mission ends well and smoothly."

This is kind of what the line mean at the end, i just dont know how I put it in the poem

Answer 6

It needs to be rhyming :(

Answer 7

or how would you end this if you are me? i just want it more complete, like a story, we have a endding, or an essay, it has a conclusion.

Answer 8

Yes i understand the hardest part is ending it

Answer 9

I just feel that it is kind of weird if i end the poem with "By bolden the boundary along the kingdom, To prevent people be the innocent victim."

Answer 10

I agree you need to wrap it up

Answer 11

Here is one i just came up with its not the best, kinda a rough draft, but since it has to rhyme...
This is my destiny or my free will, but truthfully
I hope god will help my mission end well and smoothly

Answer 12

!! this is not bad ^^, like you said, it is not perfect, but it will work.

Of cause, it is better if we can shorten it :P

Answer 13

lol sorry! just trying to throw some ideas hmm whats another word besides doing and/or smoothly?

Answer 14

nono, smoothly is fine. hold on, i think i kinda have a idea

Answer 15

what is it?

Answer 16

how about this? I change a little bit

This is my destiny or my free will , but truthfully,
May God bless my mission end well and smoothly.

Answer 17

add the to before end and it would sound amazing!

Answer 18

This is my destiny of being who I am, but truthfully,
May God bless my mission to end well and smoothly.

Answer 19

yes perfect! :) Love it!

Answer 20

yay, thank you so much, you inspired me

Answer 21

Welcome! I didnt do much it was alot of you!

Answer 22

how do i give a metal to you?

Answer 23

you helped a lot

Answer 24

You click best response and it gives a medal and we both contributed!

Answer 25

Nice

Answer 26

:)

Answer 27

This is actually this first time i write poem, in fact, i didnt even read much english poem in my life :P

Answer 28

Lol you did really good! Ive only written 6-9 poems

Answer 29

lol, ty :)

Answer 30

Welcome! Glad to have helped! @khw20