Question

Grade my rhyming couplet is it OK should I add more is there enough rhythm. MEDAL for helping

Answer 1

Snow and Ice everywhere
The sleeping bears cannot hear
The bare trees lose their leaves
To the cold autumn breeze
The fire offers little warmth
Yet we still huddle around the hearth
The owls sing throughout the night
But not even they can cure our plight
We watch the stars as the sun goes down
Only to have the clouds give us frowns
Winter is here and here to stay
Will we be able to keep the cold at bay?

Answer 2

it's good

Answer 3

Thx i need an A on this it will really help my grade

Answer 4

View my question pls, ill give a medal

Answer 5

The first doesn't rhyme. The second sounds the same but also isn't a rhyme, though you could get away with it.

Answer 6

ok thx i will fix it

Answer 7

what rhymes with everywhere

Answer 8

Snow and Ice everywhere
The sleeping bears cannot hear
The cold bare trees been lose their leaves
To the cold with autumn breeze
The fire offers little warmth
Yet we still huddle around the hearth
The owls sing throughout the night
But not even they can cure our plight
We watch the stars as the sun goes down
Only to have the clouds give us frowns
Winter is here and here to stay
Will we be able to keep the cold?

I think this is better, idk. o3o

Answer 9

Um, you have many mistakes in there @Crystalinq
Also, @MR.COOLIO How bout 'The bears snooze in the lair'

Answer 10

their*

Answer 11

That is perfect thank you ManImStumped I will use that is that ok

Answer 12

Totally. and you're welcome :)

Answer 13

should i add any more to it or is that fine

Answer 14

@ManImStumped oops Im bad at this.

Answer 15

It's fine as it is. If you want to add more, add it within the poem not after the end, since the last two lines are perfect.

Answer 16

ok thx