Question

your a charming boy
I guess i'm falling for you
but you're up against many more
If you mean what you say and you are who you say
then go for it, I'm sorry if my words hurt sometimes but you keep talking i guess you mean what you say, I just don't know if your gonna last

Answer 1

@thesweetheart3

Answer 2

I'm frightened because I've never gone this deep
I'm backing up because many have hurt me
I'm so sorry
many have used my trust to hurt me
I need to learn to trust again
but I.........I don't know
I know you'll leave because I didn't budge

Answer 3

thats is really really good an i mean my word in english @crissy15

Answer 4

I like it, you definatley have a talent. Just keep practicing! \(\Huge\color\pink♥\)

Answer 5

thanks guys, i will keep practicing @katkipe

Answer 6

Beautiful Crissy! I love it xoxo

Answer 7

This is super good!
Sounds like the narrator really cares about a secret someone special.
I do have to point something out though.
In some of the lines in the first half of your poem/story, you used "your."
In the first line, "Your a charming boy," it should be "you're."
"Your" actually means possession of something, like "this is your cat."
"You're" on the other hand means you are. We just take out the "a" and add an apostrophe.
Keep up the amazing work though, this is such a sweet poem/story!! *______*

Answer 8

thanks it is for someone special i really care about and yea i get those two mixed up