Can somebody help me edit and finish my zombie poem? Will medal, of course.

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thelittlemerpmaid · Answer

What type of poem is it?

callmekiki · Answer

It's a love poem.

thelittlemerpmaid · Answer

I mean is it a stanza, haiku, what kind of layout?

callmekiki · Answer

You have skin of rotting flesh
You're the Apple to my eye
No wonder whenever you approach,
The humans tend to die.

You turn to me with a smile
And your teeth, they all just crumble
You're modest, too. I compliment you
But all you do is grumble

thelittlemerpmaid · Answer

Okay, so just like punctuation or grammar mistakes? like proof read it?

callmekiki · Answer

To be honest, this was just a lame thing I whipped up, but my cousin wants me to finish it for him.

thelittlemerpmaid · Answer

AAAH. I see. How long?

callmekiki · Answer

I don't know. Probably four more lines or something.

thelittlemerpmaid · Answer

Your skin may be cold, but your heart pounds away;
There's something about you that leads me astray. 
Words may have meaning, but actions speak louder;
We watch the sun come up on your final hour.


That good enough? Lol

callmekiki · Answer

Love it! Thanks!

anonymous · Answer

Just for fun xD

Their blood is red their veins are blue
If you don't stay away they will eat you

It was just off the top of my head but I though it was funny haha

callmekiki · Answer

Omg! I like that too!

anonymous · Answer

Haha really? Your was really good by the way lol. I just thought of the walking dead and that came up hahahahaha