Check my poem? It's not the best because I wrote it in like 5 minutes.

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anonymous · Answer

I'm a hoe
I go down low
I'm mean
I'm not clean
I have no talent
I'm definitely not gallant
I am pretty
But not witty
I have a nice butt
But I am a slut
That's what they say
I just want to go away

sissyedgar · Answer

lol, is it 4 school?

anonymous · Answer

Yeah :) Lol

sissyedgar · Answer

idk how gud of a grade u gonna get wit dat but... its coo

anonymous · Answer

It's a "free for all" poem. It can be short, long, whatever. But thanks :)

sissyedgar · Answer

lol, np

sissyedgar · Answer

lol, u r pretty :P

anonymous · Answer

Aww thanks :)

sissyedgar · Answer

uw

anonymous · Answer

its good but see you should alternate words instead of the basics it would make you seem sophisticated and back up your statement.

anonymous · Answer

other than that its good @~SierraBozarth~

conqueror · Answer

I used to make poems in language arts :P

anonymous · Answer

I'm terrible at diction. Thanks :)

anonymous · Answer

"I have a nice butt
But I am a slut"

I don't think you'll receive a good grade with that... Lel...

anonymous · Answer

No offense tho...

camerondoherty · Answer

I hope you don't mean that directly to yourself cx

It's great, a fact that I like bout it is that its not cliche c:

anonymous · Answer

Noo, it's not about me. Just what people say about some girls.

camerondoherty · Answer

kk
Just saying, Haha cx

sammixboo · Answer

Like said abovin, using more proper words for some you used now would make it better =P.