Question

Please help for my profile summery on my resume.

Answer 1

Professional, customer excellence focused Economics and Finance student possessing more than 2 years of financial service experience. Consistent achiever who is dedicated to customer satisfaction, quality, teamwork, and accountability.

Answer 2

This is for my profile summery. Can someone please help me make this introduction sound smoother?

Answer 3

ok so this is wat you need help with

Answer 4

do you know how to make it seem smoother

Answer 5

I need to put that into my resume. Here is an example of what the "profile" should look like. http://www.bradleycvs.co.uk/images/example-of-a-good-cv.gif

Answer 6

No please help me haha

Answer 7

It's very tricky writing about my self in such a way.

Answer 8

ok i looked at it it looks simple

Answer 9

ok do you have what you wanted to put on the paper

Answer 10

ok writing about yourself is easy even if it can seem triky so what making it triky for you

Answer 11

are you still there

Answer 12

yes

Answer 13

I need it to sound professional and be grammatically correct. Can you help me do that?

Answer 14

at the top did you do that

Answer 15

Yes thats what I have so far

Answer 16

i thought so it sounds correct

Answer 17

it looks and sounds amazing

Answer 18

So you dont think there is anything I can improve?

Answer 19

you can inprove but it looks perfect the way it is

Answer 20

Alright haha :) thanks. If you ever need math help let me know

Answer 21

oh i will i suck at math

Answer 22

lol

Answer 23

Im better at math :P

Answer 24

im better at english

Answer 25

Haha you wanna write an essay for me? lol

Answer 26

i probly would

Answer 27

just because i love writing

Answer 28

Hm it might be something you would be interested in. Im taking a class in critical thinking and I love rhetorics and philosophy but this class for some reason just isn't my thing. I'm getting an essay assignment tomorrow, and I'm not sure I'll like it lol

Answer 29

ill do it

Answer 30

im home schooled so

Answer 31

Thants cool, I had to go to public school and I always wondered what homeschooling is like

Answer 32

its awesome

Answer 33

But i have to go to sleep cause its late so ill message you once I get the assignment, thanks for your help)))

Answer 34

np thanks for the assignment lol i sound like a nerd

Answer 35

Feedback.
1. Comma usage in the first sentence is a little bit unclear/awkward. Maybe fix that a little bit because "Profesional comma" then customer excellence focused --ON-- Economics and Finance student ..... doesn't sound good to me.
2. I think this one is good.

then add more details about you. like how are you doing in your classes, how will you rate your social interaction skills and etc.

Answer 36

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