Question

okay so i have another poem called Nameless
critique let me know what you think. It's based off of a play i am currently writing (this did not happen to me its about the characters)

Answer 1

It was just a fairy tale wish.
A childhood story.
You think the prince as a dream
While he sees you as a prop.
One to use, and abuse.
Until he throws you to the side of the road
Screaming, “so that happened”…
He’ll never see a face
Or a name.
Not the color of my skin.
But he remains the same.
Never forgetting
As he’s lost in my dreams.
Like the childhood fairytales I once knew,
Only blackened.
And instead of carrying me
he just threw.
I will never forget a face or his name.
But he’s already forgotten mine.
It was only the event that made him grin.
So sorry if my clothes were on a little too tight.
But he’s already said thats not what was in his sight.
Just the opportunity of “I could” and a little bit control.
So while he stays with that face, that voice, and a name.
I’m forever blank
Crumbling at the site of his hands.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

i was thinking it might be a little redundant what do you think?

Answer 4

Its an amazing poem please make more ^^

Answer 5

@chainedecho thanks

Answer 6

WOW no I think it's great. When is your writing not great???

Answer 7

@horsegirl27 oh plenty of times

Answer 8

hmmm I don't think so

Answer 9

@horsegirl27 next post will be a poem i posted on wattpad thats not good lol

Answer 10

hmmm I'm sure it will be great

Answer 11

Personally, I don't think that this is the best one that you've posted here, but it's still pretty good. Your storytelling though poetry never ceases to amaze me, though :)

Answer 12

@geneticrockhopper247 thank you and yea i agree

Answer 13

i think its a little redundant and cliche

Answer 14

I love the poem! Great job!!! :)

Answer 15

@mavagirl552000 thanks

Answer 16

I wish I could write like this!!! @ispike