Question

Journal Entry 2

Answer 1

(Journal Entry 2):
Day 2 it seems iv found this site named openstudy, an odd bunch of people the presence of my malevolent evil lures me ever closer to the edge. I try to push it in cage it within the bars of my soul, but it finds cracks and slips through them slowly making its prison break. I fear I can’t contain this within me and eventually start hurting others, as the flicker of goodness only remains in the ever omnipresent darkness within. It cries out for blood it cries out for pain it hungers for the downfall of others what am I becoming? What am becoming as the honey dipped, lucid silky voice of maliciousness engulfs me so pleasant to the flesh yet so deadly and poisons your very soul a double headed adulteress it is.

Answer 2

O_O

Answer 3

Uh you wanna talk about something Dull?

Answer 4

What no as i said before this my journal entries before i changed leading up to who i am now this isn't me now i just want to clear that up

Answer 5

Ok, cause this was getting dark here bro. Wanted to make sure you were alright. but other than that, it was really good! I can't wait for the next :D

Answer 6

This is pretty good. I must admit.

Answer 7

@sammixboo

Answer 8

Do you have a link to your other journal?

Answer 9

Um let me get it

Answer 10

Here's the first entry i can't find the link (Journal entry 1):
I begin to question my own humanity as good and evil conflict within me, there’s no human enemy only the enemy within myself. As I study my own heart I find a deeper sin lurking beneath the shroud lies I cover myself in. The sin of condemnation the guilt of knowing you've done wrong seems to drive me into deeper lies I am a solider thrust into conflict between the war of truth and deceit combating the voices inside my head the still small ring of my conscious. It seems the lies I use to cover myself blind my eyes from the reality of the situation I need help and need it fast.

Answer 11

Wow, that pretty deep, but but very intriguigeing. I would work on your sentence flow more, other than that I look forward to your other works! :)

Answer 12

Wonderfull meaningfull wow

Answer 13

Also music to go along with it be alerted this is not mine it is by Neil Davidge

Answer 14

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dw4B0o0Izfw

Answer 15

Very deep and detailed. I honestly don't have much to say than that (don't take it a wrong way that's a compliment)

Answer 16

As @sammixboo stated I completely agree with her, it is really deep and detailed and has a lot of large words that make the passage and sentences more mysterious and shocking.

Answer 17

@LeilaJudeh

Answer 18

LOL

Answer 19

where you put iv in the beginning is suppose to be I've

Answer 20

I don't even know what the right reaction would be to this. O-O

Answer 21

@demonchild99

Answer 22

There is no right or wrong reaction...a reaction is just someones way they persieve something and they show with there body or words what they think... and honestly denny... i wish i had the heart to write ...if i could write down every thing i think about in my life... and someone read them...id be put in a mental hospital...lol... I give you props for putting this up and showing the world what you ised to be and the difference of what you are and who you are.