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I need help turning this thesis statement better. This is for my senior paper. I'm writing about racism in america.

Thesis Statement:
Racism in America should be stopped because it is toxic and demolishes self worth. Treating people equally should be enforced, because racist idiots alone won't stop[ by themselves.

My friend helped my write this. I asked a teacher they said i needed to make it more thesisy..(They said that in a different why but i wasn't listening) ultimately I need to rewrite it.

Answer 1

We meet again @LifeIsADangerousGame

Answer 2

Haha so we do

Answer 3

Thesis are my week point.

Answer 4

*weak

Answer 5

How about something like this:

Racism in America must be brought to an end. It is a toxic practice that destroys a person's view of themselves and their sense of self-worth. The importance of treating all people equally must be recognized and equal treatment must be enforced to bring about change in racists.

Answer 6

That sounds perfect!

Answer 7

Let me ask my teacher.

Answer 8

I need to turn it into once sentence.

Answer 9

Ouch

Answer 10

See if you can