Question

new poem please critic give honest feed back. Dont think youre being meaning by telling me that i need to fix something. You are only bettering me as a writter

Answer 1

Society is a prepainted picture
with no room left to create or change.
But each new person is a canvas.
Too Big to be held in someones hand,
but were collected as society,
so we must be diminished...
and damaged.
In order to fit (in).
So were slowly crumbling to dust,
and thrown in with a splatter of paint;
Forever the background.
Forever unnamed and unarmed.
Every person made to be different,
but born to be the same...

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Bruh I love this!!!

Answer 4

i know i tagged a lot of people if you dont like being tagged than message me personal not in the comments

Answer 5

@Heypips thank you im so glad

Answer 6

its amazing i love it outstanding keep up the good work

Answer 7

i love medals @ispike

Answer 8

@ahvei I'm so glad that you liked it

Answer 9

always keep up that work

Answer 10

I really think you did a good job here. It gives a fresh perspective on the stigma associated with being individual, but also says it in a way that it isn't apprehensive or aggressive. I applaud this, although I personally prefer poems written in rhyme :) Just my opinion though.

Answer 11

I really like it. Your last two lines are simply amazing. Apart from a couple of grammatical liberties taken in the name of creativity, my only complaint is that you used "were" when it should have been "we're."

Answer 12

@theyankee I'm literally the opposite I can't stand rhyming lol. But it's totally a preference thing and I get that. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it and got something from it

Answer 13

@geneticrockhopper247 oksy thanks for letting me know I will for sure fix that. I appreciate the little things being told because they r often overlooked. Also I'm glad you liked the last two lines so much those r my favorite as well. I feel like it's what makes the poem

Answer 14

@ispike I love all of your works!!!!!

Answer 15

@Heypips youre so sweet

Answer 16

I like the imagery (again). Also, if you meant to capitalize the word "big" that is really awesome how it is a noun rather than an adjective. I like to do that with my writing too. If not, it's still a good poem!

Answer 17

@emblebee yea I did that on purpose and I'm glad you liked it