Question

If I give into the temptation tonight
Does that mean that I've lost the fight?
If I touch the blade even a little bit
Does it mean that your just going to throw a little fit
Well I've got a way of handling my own pain
But you take everything I do and put it to shame
Like I'm not even standing here
I don't really care as long as I get another beer
Why do you care if I have scars along my wrists?
Why does it have to end like this?
Why does it have to be so mysterious?
Delirious
Maybe I'm going insane
Maybe that boys the one to blame
He's the one who broke my heart
He's the one who tore me apart

Answer 1

@Teddyiswatshecallsme

Answer 2

This is amazing, yet so sad. I love the way it rhymes and it tells a (very sad) story well. Good job writing this! It's very powerful. I didn't see any mistakes in your writing either.

Answer 3

Wow. Nice job.

Answer 4

amazing :)

Answer 5

this is amazing and very powerful. My only comment is that if youre going to rhyme you need to be more consistent or dont rhyme at all.

Answer 6

It does rhyme.

Answer 7

wrists doesn't rhyme with b*tch

Answer 8

@ispike now it rhymes.