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OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

can someone plz rephase this sentences

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

In this soliloquy Hamlet seriously contemplates suicide. He compares death to dreaming and discusses the absence of pain and suffering that would come with death. However he realizes that suicide is a sin and the uncertainty of the afterlife. He determines that people stay alive simply because they are afraid of what comes after life. This inner conflict juxtaposes Hamlet's passionate and impulsive nature against his cautious and logical thought process. The soliloquy's importance is that is defines Hamlet's perspective and perception of the world and his reality.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

In this monologue Hamlet truly thinks about suicide. He looks at death to imagining and examines the nonattendance of torment and enduring that would accompany passing. In any case he understands that suicide is a wrongdoing and the vulnerability of existence in the wake of death. He verifies that individuals stay alive essentially on the grounds that they fear what comes after life. This internal clash compares Hamlet's enthusiastic and rash nature against his careful and sensible manner of thinking. The speech's significance is that is characterizes Hamlet's point of view and impression of the world and his existence

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Is it a good repahase paragraph

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

can someone help??

OpenStudy (tkhunny):

Why? Meaning is partially obscured in parts. It seems, at times, that it is only an exercise in the use of a thesaurus. Is this an attempt at plagiarism?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

lol no my teacher want me to rephase the original paragraph

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

which i did wanna know if it looks good

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@tkhunny so it all look good

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Is

OpenStudy (tkhunny):

"monologue" is not a good substitute "nonattendance" is almost never used like that. Rewriting is not simply an exercise in substituting a few synonyms. Rewrite thoughts, not words.

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