Did I include touch, sight, smell, taste and hearing? Spooky story 3 paragraphs.
Katherine
I woke up in a dark room. A was speculating on the events that happened that evening. Wondering how long I’d been here? How many hours? How many days? My stomach was growling pretty badly so I couldn’t tell if days or hours. All I could remember was being pushed down the stairs by the host of the party, someone I hadn’t met in my life. Even so I knew why I was down here. I was here to get Katherine back, someone I’d been searching for. Katherine had been locked in the tomb for 3 days; I couldn’t help but wonder if she was still alive. I got up slowly, my back aching from the fall and my nose struggling to take in air because of a foul smell. I began to walk, my stomach ached of hunger. I instantly remembered placing a piece of bread in my back pocket when I was at the serving table that evening. I reached quickly, so I took a bite into my bread quickly too. It was disgusting! Something slimly was all over it and the taste of it was disgusting; the slimy stuff must’ve gotten in my pocket when I fell. Now that I thought of it, the floor was slimy too and so was my most of my clothes.
I continued to walk in the dark, I couldn’t see a thing. I was stumbling here and there over things that I assumed were dismantled bodies. I now knew where the stench came from. I started walking near the wall, holding onto a rail that was there. Some parts of the rail I felt rusty, they were clearly old. Some other parts I felt the slim that I now assumed was blood from the bodies. As I continued to walk holding the rail, I came across something that felt as bars, bars from a cell. Then I heard a groan. At first quietly, then louder I knew it was Katherine. I called out her name into the darkness and the groan grew louder. It was definitely her! I tried opening the gate, but it was nearly impossible. It seemed as if the gate had been shut for a hundred years! The love I had for her gave me more than enough strength to open the gate. I ran to her and she mumbled in my ear, “hunger.” I quickly got the bread that I’d put back in my pocket earlier, wiped it with the only part of my shirt that felt dry and fed it to her. She was as hungry as a homeless man. She did not care what it tasted like. My hunger no longer mattered only hers did.
I began looking around for something I could use to unlock the chains or rip them apart. It was useless it was too dark. I began to hear growling sounds and I knew something bad was coming our way. Then I heard her sweet tender lovely voice, “Pins in my hair.” I quickly searched through her hair, I found three. I used the first on one chain, the growling became louder. I used the second on two other chains, the growling was getting closer. I began to panic and dropped the third pin. It was over I felt agony because this was the end. The thing that was growling was already in front of us; I could smell its breath and feel the heat coming from its body. I heard Katherine scream and heard the chains rip apart. She was as strong as one hundred men, she ran towards the gate, and then she closed the gate leaving me inside with the beast. Before she walked away her last words to me were, “I didn’t want to be saved.” She brought out something from her pocket, and then there was fire on a torch. Then she walked away, never looking back.

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Did I include touch, sight, smell, taste and hearing? Spooky story 3 paragraphs.
Katherine
I woke up in a dark room. A was speculating on the events that happened that evening. Wondering how long I’d been here? How many hours? How many days? My stomach was growling pretty badly so I couldn’t tell if days or hours. All I could remember was being pushed down the stairs by the host of the party, someone I hadn’t met in my life. Even so I knew why I was down here. I was here to get Katherine back, someone I’d been searching for. Katherine had been locked in the tomb for 3 days; I couldn’t help but wonder if she was still alive. I got up slowly, my back aching from the fall and my nose struggling to take in air because of a foul smell. I began to walk, my stomach ached of hunger. I instantly remembered placing a piece of bread in my back pocket when I was at the serving table that evening. I reached quickly, so I took a bite into my bread quickly too. It was disgusting! Something slimly was all over it and the taste of it was disgusting; the slimy stuff must’ve gotten in my pocket when I fell. Now that I thought of it, the floor was slimy too and so was my most of my clothes. 
I continued to walk in the dark, I couldn’t see a thing. I was stumbling here and there over things that I assumed were dismantled bodies. I now knew where the stench came from. I started walking near the wall, holding onto a rail that was there. Some parts of the rail I felt rusty, they were clearly old. Some other parts I felt the slim that I now assumed was blood from the bodies. As I continued to walk holding the rail, I came across something that felt as bars, bars from a cell. Then I heard a groan. At first quietly, then louder I knew it was Katherine. I called out her name into the darkness and the groan grew louder. It was definitely her! I tried opening the gate, but it was nearly impossible. It seemed as if the gate had been shut for a hundred years! The love I had for her gave me more than enough strength to open the gate. I ran to her and she mumbled in my ear, “hunger.” I quickly got the bread that I’d put back in my pocket earlier, wiped it with the only part of my shirt that felt dry and fed it to her. She was as hungry as a homeless man. She did not care what it tasted like. My hunger no longer mattered only hers did.
I began looking around for something I could use to unlock the chains or rip them apart. It was useless it was too dark. I began to hear growling sounds and I knew something bad was coming our way. Then I heard her sweet tender lovely voice, “Pins in my hair.” I quickly searched through her hair, I found three. I used the first on one chain, the growling became louder. I used the second on two other chains, the growling was getting closer. I began to panic and dropped the third pin. It was over I felt agony because this was the end. The thing that was growling was already in front of us; I could smell its breath and feel the heat coming from its body. I heard Katherine scream and heard the chains rip apart. She was as strong as one hundred men, she ran towards the gate, and then she closed the gate leaving me inside with the beast. Before she walked away her last words to me were, “I didn’t want to be saved.” She brought out something from her pocket, and then there was fire on a torch. Then she walked away, never looking back.

brittany67 · Answer

yes u did very good 

plz fan and medal

arivillafana · Answer

@Brittany67 why would she fan and medal just for agreeing lmao

brittany67 · Answer

ugh if u would read it she asked if she included everything

arivillafana · Answer

@Brittany67 yeah I did read it hun, but why would she give you a medal for that lol. Its silly for you to ask, but the story was beautifully written.

anonymous · Answer

@arivillafana she didn't just agree, she just responded to my question, and that's why I gave her a medal. My teacher said I included everything needed, but thank you.

arivillafana · Answer

@not.exactly.a.genius no, she just wanted a medal, which i found silly.