Question

can someone read my speech and tell me if this is a good motivational speech as a coach telling my players

Answer 1

@SolomonZelman

Answer 2

@dan815 @Luigi0210 @Nnesha @sammixboo @tkhunny

Answer 3

i have it written out like this because i cant read from my paper i can only glance at it

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@bahrom7893 @inkyvoyd @Jesstho.-. @jigglypuff314 @Kainui @radar @wolf1728 @xapproachesinfinity

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@Mehek14

Answer 6

That is a very motivational speech. I want to go score a goal!! The repetition you use is very effective at conveying your point. Great job!

Answer 7

@neonumbrella5115 are u positive this is a big grade and i keep reading it and it sound worse and worse lol

Answer 8

I am just very nervous i have to up and talk for 3 min

Answer 9

Just make sure that when you present, you say it with force and with confidence. You need to present it as if you are the coach on the field. Losing. By one point. 30 seconds left. What will you do? Give a pep talk.

Answer 10

oh okay

Answer 11

You'll do great! I just know it!

Answer 12

thx for helping

Answer 13

@TutorHere

Answer 14

This is a perfect speech! You're going to do great and be seen exactly how I want to be seen ^^ Hope to hear from you about how it went soon :)

Answer 15

okay thx for the feedback

Answer 16

is my transition good? i feel like i change topic and i dont know if it good

Answer 17

This is my favorite "Winning is not a sometime thing; it's an all the time thing. You don't win once in a while; you don't do things right once in a while; you do them right all of the time. Winning is a habit."

Answer 18

do u think i can quote that speech somewhere in my speech?

Answer 19

yes

Answer 20

where do u think i should put it in?

Answer 21

after -There is no secret to be a winner.

Answer 22

okay

Answer 23

another thing is my transition good from the sooner or later your time will come? inot i belive in each one of you?

Answer 24

Eh? .-.

Answer 25

u see i wrote sooner or later your time will come then i talk about i believe in each one of you?

Answer 26

thats that transition well in a speech? or do i need to add something

Answer 27

but its fine if u don't understand what i mean

Answer 28

You don't need to add anything

Answer 29

i feel like this sentence is awkwardly wriiten -everyone is born as a winner, but it is about when you are going to prove to other people that you werent a mistake- do u think this sentence is easy to understand what i mean by?

Answer 30

Its perfect and easy to understand

Answer 31

okay that's all and i appreciate your help and your time because i know there is not a lot of helpers in the English section lol:)

Answer 32

Well now there's me so wooohoooo lol

Answer 33

hahaha yeah

Answer 34

Soo if u ever need any help just tag me

Answer 35

alright will do:)

Answer 36

one last thing lol just saw it

Answer 37

you see the part where i say that chance you missed was suppose to separate you and them. does that make sense? sounds awkward

Answer 38

Remove that

Answer 39

okay

Answer 40

so just skip from chance you miss to because of that chance you missed.....

Answer 41

Hmm...

Answer 42

Yes

Answer 43

okay and i like the pro pic lol:)

Answer 44

haha ty