Question

can some one plz correct my essay

Answer 1

plz help due tomorrow

Answer 2

plz help due tomorrow

Answer 3

plz help due tomorrow

Answer 4

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Answer 5

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Answer 6

I would love to but I am really super busy :( have you had your parents try and edit?!

Answer 7

"Many schools and colleges are banning athletes from a team for the low grade"
is sort of sketchy..."the low grade" doesn't really make sense.
Try instead:

"Many schools and colleges have implemented rules stating that students must have a certain grade, or better, in order to join the team."
or
"Many schools and colleges are banning athletes from joining sports teams due to unsatisfactory grades"

Answer 8

actually better would be:
"Many schools and colleges are banning athletes with unsatisfactory grades from joining their sports teams"

Answer 9

Read your essay out loud to yourself and see if it flows nicely :) sometimes that helps! You want to pause as little as possible so that the reading is smooth.