Question

hey every one Boys and Girls i was hoping you could post all of your POEM's here. I love to read them and give my input about them, thx.

Answer 1

@AloneS

Answer 2

Hello @SapphireMoon

Answer 3

Here's a haiku I wrote when I was just getting into it (haven't written poetry in a while tho):

Caterpillar who
Melts istelf and then reforms
Look! A butterfly!

*applause*

Maybe I'll start writing poetry again, I used to do a lot of free verse, I'll see if I can dig up my notebook. :)

Answer 4

Hi @Yinshy!

Answer 5

okay thank you and i like the haiku

Answer 6

Here is one I wrote last year:

Hello Mr. Walker
Why don’t you talk to her
Look at what you’ve done

They keep prying
And she keeps lying
“What is going on?!”

She keeps crying
As well as dying
Keeping it all to herself

All alone she contemplates
‘I can’t live with myself’

She’s falling into the black
Letting it take her back
To where she truly belongs

A knife, hand in hand
Ready to join
Those just like her

‘What have I done?’
‘Who have I become?’
She feels like nothing on this plane

Answer 7

as lost as a fly
as beautiful as a diamond
and yet as deadly as a snake.

I watch you go
into the wild I see
just as i see nothing to be

i wait and wait
for you
the only one of your kind

i wait
i wait
but nothing seems to come back

as i let go of the past
the future becomes more clear
a distant speck of time

or a lost soul
I do not know
but as i let go

i see
it comes back to me or for me
I do not know

but as dawn moves above the clouds
i see it even more
clearer than ever be for

as lost as a fly
as beautiful as a diamond
and yet as deadly as a snake

Answer 8

this is my poem @SapphireMoon what do you think??? and any one else who wants to comment

Answer 9

@Awolflover1 and @AloneS please do tell me what you think about this

Answer 10

Awesome :)

Answer 11

@AloneS

Answer 12

and thank you @Awolflover1

Answer 13

you're welcome!

Answer 14

@pooja195

Answer 15

@Yinshy I like it! It's a beautiful kind of introspective...

Answer 16

thank you so much i'm trying to get into poems and this is my first big poem @SapphireMoon

Answer 17

@jabez177 come here and read this please and tell me what you think

Answer 18

@Anaise

Answer 19

@sweetburger

Answer 20

What do I do,
in a world with out you,
a world without sunshine,
a world without light,
what do I do
in a world without you?

When I lost you,
I lost my way,
I lost my hope,
I lost my dreams,
what do I do,
in a world without you?

Without you I am nothing
I have no substance
I have no hope,
I have no light.
What do I do
in a world without you?

What do I do
in a world without you?
What do I do?
When I lose you.

Answer 21

*applause*

Answer 22

love the poem got any more for me?

Answer 23

Lol ya

Answer 24

I will stay with you
When you can't see the bright side,
I will be there for you,
Even on your worst days,
I will protect you
Even if I get hurt.
I will follow you
No matter where you go,
I will catch you,
When you fall down,
I will love you,
No matter how hard it gets,
I will be with you,
When you cry,
I will sit with you on the dark side,
When you can't look at the bright side,
No matter how dark it gets,
I will be there for you.

Answer 25

Come back,
I need you,

Come back,
I want you,

Come back,
I hate you,

Come back,
I love you,

Come back,
I miss you,

Come back,
I need you,

Come back,
because I never got the chance to say good bye.

Answer 26

what is life with out love-Yinshy Smith


some say
life is better
than love

but with out
love there is no life
so love is life

and life is a ingredient
in love
and in life its self

love is every thing
with out love
you are nothing

Answer 27

wacha think @SapphireMoon

Answer 28

It's lovely, @Yinshy. (Sorry I don't have a more eloquent response each time, my brain is doing mathematics rn, not linguistics...)

Answer 29

its fine

Answer 30

I am a shadow
in the light
but in the dark

I find my self
traveling the earth
some where in the future

and yet some where in the past
I run from this fear
hiding behind every one and thing

i hind from what defies me
i hide from what chases me
i hide from what is there to me but not others

I am a shadow
in the light
but in the dark

hiding from the world
and not
the one I hide behind

Answer 31

@jigglypuff314

Answer 32

@Awolflover1

Answer 33

@AloneS

Answer 34

come read the new poems that have been posted

Answer 35

Ooooo one sec

Answer 36

The Red Lady
By: Dj Kiryuu
There stands the red lady
Leaning against the cherry blossoms tree
Waiting to have a way to go
North, South
East, or West
It doesn’t matter to her

There stands the red lady
Watching as the cherry blossoms
Blow one way and
Another way. Some leaving its
Nest in which they were
Born from.

There stands the red lady
Wanting to have as many options
As the cherry blossoms. To be
Able to explore to the seas
And past the seas. To be able to see
The world past there.

There stands the red lady
Seeing as the cherry blossom flow
Pass by the people waving hello
And goodbye to them as they make their journey.

There stands the red lady
By the cherry blossom tree.

Answer 37

I better at short stories though

Answer 38

You write some pretty good poems @Yinshy

Answer 39

This is called One Before Two.
Its very short and kind of unusual from what everyone would expect to come out of me, but the main and entire point is that one comes before two.
Crawling comes before walking.
Work comes before play.
Being and doing something comes before the glory of doing and being something.
If we allow one thing to come before another in its proper order, then life goes much smoother.

Answer 40

thank you @563blackghost and i love the poems and stories every one and thank you for the poem @Atsie

Answer 41

hey @Addicted2Anime

Answer 42

Here's one of my oldies, slightly Christian-oriented but I like it:

My wish is to ride
upon a star,
and fly away
to where You are.

to hear Your voice,
and know Your love,
to know You reign
from up above.

my wish is to seek
and save the rest
of Your lost sheep
from the wilderness,

my wish is to fly
to where You are
upon my dreams,
upon a star.

Answer 43

I don't really have a poem buts its a melody , does that count? Ill post them

Answer 44

Fading in , fading out.
I wish you were here right now , yeah right , right now.
Bleeding til I see the light , I know its the end.
Watch as I come in to tell you its not what its seems.
You think its that easy , go ahead and think again.
You don't know this feeling til you are in.
Gotta have the grip of your last touch.
Cause I think I'm bout to bust.

"music playing"

Come on in , I wish you the best.
Move on to her then ill loose stress.
Come on and see what you thought ill be.
Without you here , its like my life has disappeared

Answer 45

more of a medloy/poem I guess but ignore the part "music playing" (I copied and pasted it from my previous post with this so that's why it has nothing edited)

Answer 46

ill take any thing thank you

Answer 47

your welcome!! How do you like it?

Answer 48

im in class atm but i will read it shortly

Answer 49

okay , tag me to this post again once you read It :D

Answer 50

This one may sound child-ish

You make me laugh you make me cry.
you make sure that butterflies fly by.
I never knew how cool you were,
Better then that stir the soup
you where supposed to stir.

You ran away from home,
I never had heard a sound from you
all I hear is your chew,
I forgot about the rabbits and deer,
and you almost forgot
about washing your ears.

I look for a plant and see you
a sneezing kitten, "achoo, achoo!".

All done
All gone
you're like a little fawn.

(I know that it made no sense too lol)

Answer 51

Wrote a few long ones in the car today, made a separate question for them. What do you guys think? @Glitter I liked your poem, no, it didn't make much sense but it was enjoyable! :) @Frozen15 Yours is quite interesting, I can see how it would be a song.

Answer 52

I like all of them :3

Answer 53

@SapphireMoon

Answer 54

@AloneS

Answer 55

I love it, @Yinshy! One thing, it took me until the end to figure out that when you say "relies" you mean "realize". "Relies" is another form of "rely" as in "to depend on," while "realize" means "finally see to be true." Also in the second line, the plural of "leaf" is "leaves" but I could see why you might want to leave it there (see what I did there? lol).

Answer 56

yeah thanks

Answer 57

ill fix that quick so no one makes fun of it xD

Answer 58

As the wind blows
As the leaf's on the trees leave
As the words slip through my lips to describe this feeling

As I realize I can't move
As I realize I can't talk
As I realize I wont

i start to close my eyes
i start to rise to the sky
i start to see some one or thing

i want to meet them
i want to get closer
i want to say some thing

but i cant
but i wont
but i must

but i must
but i wont
but i cant

As i get to the top
As my feet graze the clouds
As i open my mouth to try

i open my eyes
and its
gone

forever long gone
forever a island in the sky
forever a dream i will soon come to realize is true

Answer 59

omg hey @Atsie the famous poem writer

Answer 60

like my poems?

Answer 61

@Yinshy
Hey there! xD

Answer 62

Made this up precisely on the spot.


I had sorrows
in the walk of my belt
and tears in
the feeling I felt

because nothing
was something even when
we looked at the past
and asked for determination
in the things
we hoped would last.

Answer 63

*applause*

Answer 64

And yes @Yinshy I do like what you have written. If you kept practicing, you could master the art really well! ^.^

Answer 65

thank you @Atsie i started writing poems yesterday and now i have 4-7 poems that every one likes and love but i will never be as good or better than you xD

Answer 66

Do you guys think it would be misusing the board to have word challenges? Like we have a question where someone posts a word and everyone writes a poem around it?

Answer 67

i think we could do that

Answer 68

@SapphireMoon

Answer 69

@SapphireMoon

Answer 70

@Atsie

Answer 71

when we think about it
when we hear the word

we freeze
we stop

and wait
and wait

for a moment
for a wile

we wait
and wait

i stare
for a moment

looking it in the eye
so evil yet so kind

it takes away the pain
and yet brings more

DEATH is its name and i hope
if you're reading this

you don't
and wont

look it in the
eye any time soon

Answer 72

any one?

Answer 73

have any comments

Answer 74

That's kinda interesting and actually impressive....I had to read it twice because at first the "wife" thing threw me off, but I like the theme and the motive behind it definitely. <3

Answer 75

what are you talking about and to?

Answer 76

@GIitter what do you think???

Answer 77

I like the poem actually, I looked over it like 5 times and its perfect

Answer 78

the DEATH one?

Answer 79

or one of the older ones?

Answer 80

or some one elses?

Answer 81

all of them ^_^

Answer 82

witch one of mine are your fave?

Answer 83

any one may awnser

Answer 84

@SapphireMoon

Answer 85

@kaylak12345

Answer 86

@563blackghost

Answer 87

I wrote what I wrote about the very last poem you posted @Yinshy

Answer 88

why did you say wife there was no wife in it???????

Answer 89

Oh my goodness, my bad! I totally misread it! It says "while" not "wife"
I seriously apologize. I have hallucinations a lot.

Answer 90

its ok but other wise you like it ay

Answer 91

I do ^.^

Answer 92

im kinda wowed atm as you said you were impressed

Answer 93

My favorite of your's @Yinshy is `I am a shadow` doesnt really have a title but I really like that one ^^

Nicely Done!