Can someone give me a suggestion on a good leading sentence.
My topic is teenage pregnancy

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Can someone give me a suggestion on a good leading sentence. 
My topic is teenage pregnancy

snopet · Answer

What is your complete thesis?

kaylieanime · Answer

On top of the thesis, what type of writing is this?

flowers · Answer

A newspaper articles

flowers · Answer

I thinking of a good leading that would grad readers attentions

kaylieanime · Answer

Is it Informative with stating facts? Or is it ''defend your side' argumentative?

flowers · Answer

Stating facts

snopet · Answer

Alright so, you want it to be something that will grab reader attention, all the while sharing what your article will be about.  (brief) Example: "Teen pregnancy is an epidemic that seems to be infecting more and more youth every year."

snopet · Answer

@KaylieAnime  was just about to write that my example was a very rough start, and @flowers could we hear a little more about what your piece is about?

kaylieanime · Answer

(An epidemic is a widespread and infectious disease. Pregnancy can cause std's if not careful) I have seen some successful pieces starting with a statistic and branching off from there. Or using emotion, then adding a fact.

kaylieanime · Answer

(Pregnancy is not an epidemic)

flowers · Answer

Sure
Im talking about the countries that dont have least risk and a greatest risk of teen pregnancy. I did asia where teen pregnancy have the lowest rate throughout the whole world. the united state have the greatest risk of teen pregnancy

kaylieanime · Answer

Which part of Asia? I'm curious

flowers · Answer

Japan and Thailand

kaylieanime · Answer

That is interesting. Those two areas have strong morals (perhaps religious at times) and enforce laws well

flowers · Answer

Ikr but the presidency rate is about 4%

kaylieanime · Answer

Looking at articles and gathering ideas (such as tone and organization) will be a big help. Have you given any thought on how the thesis will sound like?

kaylieanime · Answer

Remember, any plagiarism will cause severe punishments, even if it is changing a few words.

flowers · Answer

Like a serious matter
A shocking matter 
Ik that copying is bad 
The thing i copy was the numbers 
It would be not smart if i made up the numbers rate :)

kaylieanime · Answer

Yes. Citing sources well is also needed.

kaylieanime · Answer

Anything to add? @snopet

flowers · Answer

Should i say 
Teen are feeling head over heals but can they deal with babies over stress

snopet · Answer

Try to make the idea that you are trying to convey clearer.

snopet · Answer

Also, this is just some general for writing, try to create an outline. It will help you organize all the ideas and facts that you want to include into a coherent essay.

flowers · Answer

Already did
Everything is finished 
I just need a lead that would grab a readers attention

kaylieanime · Answer

To your thesis you did have a creative start but it could be improved. Say: "All around the world teens start and break relationships in hope to find the one. However, teen pregnancy is not the best way to determine a future spouse."

kaylieanime · Answer

Don't use my example though. I want your mind to think.

flowers · Answer

Thanks dont worry 
I needed an example

snopet · Answer

And make sure to include a bridging statement that will tie your hook into your thesis!  Good luck! (:

kaylieanime · Answer

Glad @snopet and I could help ^_^

flowers · Answer

Thanks guy

kaylieanime · Answer

Don't forget to close the question.