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I mean it looks (Kinda) good jak. Maybe fix the (Negative & Positive) effects of solar panels on some, and explain yourself more clearly with the causes too. Ex: Causes: Describe the who, what, when, why...of your topic. Who: Solar Energy What: Energy from the sun that is then transformed as a source of electricity When: Solar Energy is usually only produced during the "Day" when the sun is actually out shining its bright rays of sunshine etc. etc (Do something like this not exact words and all if u want) For the "Positive and Negative" reasons on Solar Energy Ex: (I really like how u worded one of the negative effects so I'll just add on) Positive Effect 1: " Solar Energy is the main need for Solar Panels devices made to run off off the energy from the sunlight. Solar Panels transfer rays of light from the sun-(Solar Energy) and converts it into electricity. This betters the environment by reducing the use of natural gas for electricity causing less pollution in the world." Negative Effect 1: As u stated "We can't go gree with it because we use fossil fuels to mine the resource for the panels" Solar Energy is mainly known for being the main source for powering the "Solar Panel. The resources used to make solar panels are mined. Fossil fuels are needed to mine those resources for the solar panels. The use of fossil fuels results in air pollution which could cause global warming problems. (These are just examples,but if u get what I'm tryna say here-u need to go into more detail with answering the questions ya know.)
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