Question

what do you think of these lyrics i made? "I fell in love with with a girl online, when i was looking for answers to my homework, she makes me laugh and keeps the depression at bay, sunshine blue skies, its the perfect feeling when im talking to her, when im talking to her, yeah aye, the perfect feeling when im talking to her, I fell in love with a pretty girl, my snowflake, my queen, she knows everything, there is about me, want to get married and im down for that, look twenty years in the future, and i wont regret it, only wishing i couldve met u sooner."

Answer 1

good but i think fix the first part

Answer 2

Yea fix the first part

Answer 3

more rymes in the first part

Answer 4

Instead of "I feel in love". say i was deeply in love

Answer 5

oh, yeah, thats good

Answer 6

At first, I assumed you were joking because the beginning is so very comical, but reading into it I figured out how serious you are lmao

Answer 7

idk who that is

Answer 8

what this girl name?

Answer 9

never mind

Answer 10

Bro this manz was just lvl 0

Answer 11

that's good

Answer 12

who @PWRDrEnMz

Answer 13

if he leveled up so fast (or she, or them) someone is probably self inflating there smartscore.

Answer 14

Lmao

Answer 15

It's very good.

Although, do continue working on it. Including rhyming.

Answer 16

i have been answering questions and talking to friends and people have became a fan

Answer 17

wonder who that girl is o-o

Answer 18

yk who it is jay

Answer 19

this made me \(laugh\)

Answer 20

wait what