Question

A song I wrote: (sounds kinda bad eep)

I've broken you about a thousand times.
Yet you still care for me.
I've written a thousand rhymes.
And You're always there for me.

Is this love or is it ecstasy?
Tell me, were we ever meant to be?
Could you rely on me?

I guess not.
I guess I was thinking the wrong thought.
Guess I was bending the wrong wire.
I've always been a bad liar.

I've hit the wrong notes.
Built the wrong boats.
I guess we weren't meant to be.
Well, I guess it's fake ecstasy.
Bc, we weren't meant to be.

I'm sitting on yo couch.
I promise I won't slouch.
I'll be perfect.
Tell me, baby, I'm worth it.

Is this love or is it ecstasy? (echoes after 2x)
Tell me, were we ever meant to be?
Could you rely on me?

Look, I'm sorry I hurt you.
Ik what you've been through.
Ik I shouldn't have picked up that knife.
N' told a lie.
I couldn't spend all my life...
With you.
But instead, I spend every day whispering a silent cry.

I'm sorry.
Forgive me.

Well, I guess sorry wasn't good enough.
Ok, I could've been rough.
I could've hurt you worse, bc you knew I was tough.

Sorry that I hurt you.
Sorry that I even said anything.
I guess you and I. Our love is through.
So today... I took off that ring.

Answer 1

When I wrote this, I was thinking about one person. N' that person might know it's them. Because I hurt them multiple times and I still cannot forgive myself.

Answer 2

its a song allready

Answer 3

lier=

Answer 4

This... hits hard. ;c

Answer 5

I don't understand.

Answer 6

And Ik it does, bc I was thinking abt you the whole time ;-;

Answer 7

Thank you Kathy (: <3 <3

Answer 8

Nicee, well written i love it :) good jobb keep it up!

Answer 9

Thank you! I will try.

Answer 10

Its actually really nice astrid, Great work!!!!