Question

who likes my story fn

Answer 1

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ddG7LcuZlXwO69E35FJmEitbVNQ6a5Q0yJu_okrgk2U/edit

Answer 2

u leaked your own name

Answer 3

in evry story

Answer 4

ik

Answer 5

kasandraaaa

Answer 6

k

Answer 7

bc it is abt me duh

Answer 8

kasyyyyy

Answer 9

was that girl u like bad?

Answer 10

was she fine

Answer 11

umm

Answer 12

was she a hotty

Answer 13

gimme medal

Answer 14

very

Answer 15

tell me first

Answer 16

she was okk

Answer 17

send me pic for proof

Answer 18

ion have one

Answer 19

gimme

Answer 20

this her

Answer 21

wow yes

Answer 22

knew it

Answer 23

im like mozart

Answer 24

i fix it

Answer 25

;-;

Answer 26

to Amy

Answer 27

check all subj

Answer 28

wdym

Answer 29

wanna watch a movie?

Answer 30

y u say my name

Answer 31

and yes

Answer 32

bet

Answer 33

ooof

Answer 34

I mean the story has a message, but even so, if it's a story it needs timing, this is rushed into a paragraph

Answer 35

it's really good I just think that there should be a bit more words and like say her age and say stuff about her, but from there its really good

Answer 36

Just make sure to add stuff about her in the next paragraph <3

Answer 37

its coo

Answer 38

I think it's a fine basis for a story, even though, as some others have stated, it doesn't feel "complete" just yet. In fact, the conflict of forbidden love that you introduce in this excerpt is a classic and timeless one that readers seemingly never tire of exploring.
It certainly sounds like "Amy" is going through some rough times. The good thing is that she's still young, so there will be plenty of time for her to go through life, hopefully meeting more people who accept her as she is and support her as she needs. Hoping for good things from our young protagonist and writer :)

Answer 39

its really shorts its not really a story.

Answer 40

Coolio