Question

Rate my brand new short poem "side"

Answer 1

Ill give it a 9

Answer 2

put some extra words on the poem and that will be a 10

Answer 3

np

Answer 4

i'll give it a 100

Answer 5

In my opnion it seems like a typical love poem but it is still has a nice message and is wholesome also please proof read your work because last time I checked perfec is not a word
Rating: 82/100

Answer 6

I give it a ten I would totally send that to a crush or to my bf if I had one lol anyway it's a 10/10

Answer 7

also check out my poems "Change", "For You", "You", "Leave", "Shine", and "Spark"

Answer 8

if want to see one of my other poems just ask

Answer 9

I wanna see the other poems.

Answer 10

you are very good at writing

Answer 11

any particular poem

Answer 12

np

Answer 13

next poem "You"

I’m starin at you, thinkin about us, wonderin
if I should jump on that bus, knowing that it isn’t worth the risk
at all because you would just make me fall in love with you all over again
and then you would shove a dagger in my chest
I told you I didn’t care, but every time I’m around you I feel like I need some air
but every time I fall in love with you, eventually my heart gets broken in two
by 4waldo/Asarath

Answer 14

really good

Answer 15

np

Answer 16

u hella good!

Answer 17

np

Answer 18

next poem "Spark"

Every time I see you I become a new guy
and I feel like I can fly, cause you are an angel from the sky,
who fell for me a small town guy, the reason is unclear, but every time
i’m near you I feel a spark of two
4waldo/Asarath

Answer 19

9/10

Answer 20

feedback helps me improve my poems

Answer 21

next poem "Shine"

The other night I saw a star in the moonlight
it reminded me of you, the way you shine so bright,
in the sun or in the rain, you are perfect
just the way you wanna be
4waldo/Asarath

Answer 22

OMG! 10/10 on all of themm!

Answer 23

bruhh how could u be so good at rhyming I suck at peotry I never know how to rhyme I always rhyme words terribble

Answer 24

dam bruh u have to tech me cause I failed at poetry, lol

Answer 25

ok, all I do is think of a song and then add a rhythm, i listen to country music, thats all, so I add a country music theme

Answer 26

its all about the rhythm

Answer 27

well I would like to rhyme like u do. those peoms r so cutee
how bout guy with thy or ugh bye with hi ugh!! Idk bruh I suck at thiss

Answer 28

you will get better

Answer 29

i was awful at poems first, you also need an idea

Answer 30

O okay thanks for the advice

Answer 31

OMG SO GOOD!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK