Question

I really need help! :(

Answer 1

ask the question a different
way

Answer 2

how?

Answer 3

idk but it seems like they tell you what to do in the instrutions

Answer 4

I need help on it ,

Answer 5

so ask the question in a different way what part do you need help wit

Answer 6

basically I need help with writing paragraphs for it

Answer 7

ok start wit paragraph 1 what are your thoughts on the instructions for that

Answer 8

my thoughts are I am having a hard time writing

Answer 9

man what lmao

Answer 10

please someone help!

Answer 11

Do you understand the topic that this paper is based on, first off? Have you studied and researched articles that could help you cite the sources you’ll find?

Answer 12

Scratch that, I see now this assignment is based off one source. All you’d have to do is quote from that page alone.

Answer 13

YES, I read the article but I just can't write

Answer 14

In that case, the introductory paragraph is basically going to be you introducing your thoughts on the source. Start off with the author of the article, the primary point (what to say when the police you to stop recording them), and some introductory quotes from the article.

Answer 15

At last, it went through.
Send your essay draft through here so we can all read, Lia.

Answer 16

It’s written great so far, I say you nailed the first three criteria of the first paragraphs. It isn’t using too many quotes, just summarizing what it says and agreeing to it.


By my view, you only need help finishing paragraph 4, then 5, and conclusion, correct?

Answer 17

yes

Answer 18

for fourth paragraph
Have you encountered hostility or disapproval of others when photographing? if not

Provide a real-life example of someone encountering hostility when photographing (this can be related to journalism).

Answer 19

can someone help me with the real-life example of someone encountering hostility when photographing

Answer 20

So let’s see what we can add to paragraph 4 to finish off it asking you if you had encountered this kind of hostility before.
You said no, but you’d keep your eye out. Great.
What other advice can you take from the article, maybe even an example, that would help you in case you encountered this situation in the future?

Answer 21

Yes.
I believe the author is giving you a real life example in the article itself, and what officers can say when this sort of situation pops up.

What will you do if an officer tells you to stop recording something?

Answer 22

Since this question is a personal one, it basically asks what you’d do if this happened to you, using what you’ve learned from this article.

Answer 23

since I don't have anything personal to say , I need an example of of someone encountering hostility when photographing

Answer 24

That paragraph sounds great.

And all right, I’m that case, we’d do a little “What should I do if an officer tells me to stop recording” research on the internet, find some other article of an example, and summarize it.

Answer 25

but it doesn't have to be about an officer, its in general

Answer 26

Just Don't Film The Cops. Simple

Answer 27

that's not the point

Answer 28

And what grade is this?

Answer 29

11th grade

Answer 30

Eventually, you’ll stumble upon an example of someone going through hostility while recording the police.
But what you have so far is great, coupled with the example from the article you are provided.

Answer 31

You can probably find an example on Youtube or Microsoft Video.

Answer 32

Once you find the example, watch and summarize into your paragraph. And then that part should be complete!

Answer 33

As for the fifth paragraph, again, this is more personal, you can answer this yourself. I don’t believe you’d need an example from real life to elaborate on that one.

Answer 34

I barely have a page done

Answer 35

so I don't even know where to continue writing

Answer 36

Did you not show me your essay thus far?

Answer 37

Send the research paper now with all the edits and paragraphs done, so we can see where you need to elaborate

Answer 38

The thing is, she is currently in the middle of writing it. She informed me that she needed assistance with the fourth, fifth, and conclusion paragraphs of the assignment.
Once that’s done, we can probably help elaborate and correct.

Answer 39

Appreciate it, but if she shows us the final paragraphs, we can have a better understanding of where she is at

Answer 40

I think with the completion of the fourth paragraph, coupled with your personal 5th and the conclusion, should get you to two, Lia.

Answer 41

It seems now we also must expand it into two pages.

Answer 42

ok

Answer 43

She sent what I needed to see, thank you

Answer 44

Lia, focus on the fourth paragraph with the experience. Blend information out of it as much as possible, and summarize it along with your own thoughts. Say what you would do if you encountered this situation in your own life.

Answer 45

Is there perhaps someone you know who has encountered hostility when taking photographs or recording?

Answer 46

no I want to provide an example

Answer 47

Lia, the YouTube video’s example should be fine.

Answer 48

Well Q #4 asks a personal question, not necessarily seeking for an example

Answer 49

This is what I mentioned, but she replied with

Answer 50

I’d say “someone” counts as anyone that research could find that encountered hostility.

Answer 51

Is that what the teacher suggested? Bcuz in the past, I've gotten points taken off for being off-topic

Answer 52

yeah it is

Answer 53

Have you watched the video and gathered your thoughts on it? All you’d need to do is use the example and place it into your fourth paragraph. Of course, you would cite your sources.

Answer 54

Then proceed with some of your own personal thoughts on that situation, and the next paragraph should follow.

Answer 55

Actually I don't want to use that video

Answer 56

Provide a real-life example of someone encountering hostility when photographing (this can be related to journalism).

Answer 57

In that case, I’d continue to researh, unless, as @dontsaymyname suggested, you have someone you know that experienced this.

Answer 58

Research*

Answer 59

thanks, I don't have any personal or related experiences

Answer 60

Does a friend or family member ?

Answer 61

nope

Answer 62

Now, it says it can be related to journalism. I don’t see any “police” specification. Maybe look up “journalism hostility examples” and see what pops up.

Answer 63

That’s factual. What will you add to that paragraph?

Answer 64

Perhaps you can say something along the lines as, I personally have not encountered hostility or disapproval of others when photographing, and then the paragraph you mentioned above, and then possibly state, however, many individuals express disapproval and/or hostility towards those who are only expressing their right outlined in the First Amendment

Answer 65

Which ties in paragraph 3 as well

Answer 66

Thank you, and you can change it up to your own writing style 💙

Answer 67

yes

Answer 68

I personally have not encountered hostility or disapproval of others when photographing, Generally speaking, though, when you are in public, it is legal to record someone, video record or audio record, as long as they don't have what is called, “an expectation of privacy,” or rather a reasonable expectation of privacy.

Answer 69

I will say for encouragement that after this paragraph, it should get easier. The fifth question is definitely more personal, not needing to take any other person’s example. And the conclusion is simply summarizing the main point in every paragraph you’ve wrote until that point.


My final advice for the night is to re-read it once it’s at last complete, I believe with what you’ve got so far, you’ll be able to brainstorm the rest once enough effort is put.
I’ll leave this to you, @dontsaymyname .
Good luck, Lia. 👍🏻

Answer 70

And I was thinking for Paragraph 5, you can build off of paragraph 4, which teachers lovee, organization and chronically, anywayz so like you can mention your personal thought on the question, maybe like, I do not feel the need to be self-concious while tsking photographs, as previous mentioned, my rights have already been protected by the first amendment, on the ither hand, that would not mean I would not be self-aware of my surroundings and the individuals I am photgraphing, and maybe mention some precautions you would perhaps take, just a thought

Answer 71

alright

Answer 72

Lml if you need anymore help

Answer 73

thanks, will do

Answer 74

Okie 💙

Answer 75

If you are done could you please close the post.

Answer 76

close it

Answer 77

ok