how does this poem look?
My bestfriend:
whenever i talk to my bestfriend, i can just be myself with no need to pretend. we might chat for hours and still never run out, of the best topics to gossip about. fun becomes funnier and when im purple, my bestfriend will bring me a sunflower or two. they loyal and supportive, no matter what and you are that bestfriend who has valued alot.

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how does this poem look? 
My bestfriend:
whenever i talk to my bestfriend, i can just be myself with no need to pretend. we might chat for hours and still never run out, of the best topics to gossip about. fun becomes funnier and when im purple, my bestfriend will bring me a sunflower or two. they loyal and supportive, no matter what and you are that bestfriend who has valued alot.

Astrid1 · Answer

I like it.

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

I like it.

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

just check you punctuations and grammar.

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

yes check ur punctuations  and grammar  but at the end of the day i love this poem what is up with these great poems bruh someone teach me how to write a great one

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

How does this poem look? My best friend: Whenever I talk to my best friend, I can just be myself with no need to pretend. We might chat for hours and still never run out, of the best topics to gossip about. Fun becomes funnier and when I'm purple, my best friend will bring me a sunflower or two. Their loyal and supportive, no matter what and you are that best friend who has valued a lot. this is how your grammar looks when i correct it.

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

check the rules this poem doesn’t belong here it goes in the writing posts. English/Writing Group Rules The kinds of things that are allowed to be posted in this subject: - English and Language Arts homework help / questions - Proofreading & Editing requests Do NOT: - post content that is not originally yours - post content without educational purpose (e.g. a generic "feedback?", "thoughts?", "how does this make you feel?") - post questions asking for writing ideas (unless it is for an essay for school) - post comments that do not offer assistance with someone's question Proofreading posts whose comments result in "looks good" will be closed since further proofreading is not needed. All old posts that break these rules will be closed. All new posts that break these rules will be deleted.

axie · Answer

The poem looks amazing! It reminds me of summer even though its about friendship.

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

@axie wrote:

The poem looks amazing! It reminds me of summer even though its about friendship.

thank you so much ^_^

mhchen · Answer

So that's why I'm friendzoned all the time eh, reeee

Behold my poem "My crush":
I chat with her for hours and never run out. I bring my crush gifts and stuff. I'm loyal and supportive. Oof but she don't love me .-.

(im joking, good poem btw, but it can look better if you add like line-breaks or some kinda structure to it so it doesn't look like a paragraph)

Hawks · Answer

its really goot keep it up

Sailor · Answer

Amazing 🤩

BrokenMoon · Answer

I do like it but work on grammar.