uhh Poem?!?!
you can Cry on me my shoulder will be the soft pillow you where missing I will hold you not to tight but enough not to let you go

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Sailor · Answer

It's pretty good, I was confused for a second because it isn't exactly in the format of a poem o-o

Sailor · Answer

So it's a pretty good start

CripQUEZZ · Answer

punctuation is key bro, i had an aneurysm tryna read that

Sock · Answer

i don't write poems so i can't judge but I think its pretty good :)

CripQUEZZ · Answer

but its good lol

Jaxs · Answer

i never done a poem lmao 💀   but thx

Sailor · Answer

@jaxs wrote:

i never done a poem lmao 💀 but thx

No problem.

Sock · Answer

@jaxs wrote:

i never done a poem lmao 💀 but thx

np, see ya around :D

Astro · Answer

@sailor wrote:

It's pretty good, I was confused for a second because it isn't exactly in the format of a poem o-o

I agree but a pretty cool start

Icyhot · Answer

@jaxs wrote:

i never done a poem lmao 💀 but thx

Hey! It's good for a first poem! Don't give up, and continue making them! You did great. It's very relatable also.

Icyhot · Answer

@icyhot wrote:

@jaxs wrote:

i never done a poem lmao 💀 but thx

Hey! It's good for a first poem! Don't give up, and continue making them! You did great. It's very relatable also.

Im pretty sure everybody needs a person to cry on

Jaxs · Answer

i made it for a friend who was having a bad day it just came to me

GabeYoungEpic2008 · Answer

damn thats fire

coolcupcake261 · Answer

i hate doing poem for some dumb reason i will read them but not do them

coolcupcake261 · Answer

;-;

GabeYoungEpic2008 · Answer

My Poem  shoutout to jaxs

hold my hand but i dont feel anything touch me but i still dont feel anything say you love me and im a waterfall of feeling

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

could i extend this poem and put a twist on it

Jaxs · Answer

sounds good!!

Jaxs · Answer

might be on to somthin here lol

GabeYoungEpic2008 · Answer

Does anyone  like my poem 
My Poem  shoutout to jaxs

hold my hand but i dont feel anything touch me but i still dont feel anything say you love me and im a waterfall of feeling

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

you can Cry on me 
my shoulder 
will be the soft pillow 
you where missing
 I will hold you not to tight but enough not to let you go
I will not let you leave my sight oh no
I will be here for you 
I will your hero
I understand the pain 
Sometimes i feel as though I'm not the same
you can Cry on me 
my shoulder 
will be the soft pillow 
you where missing
you were missing
i stayed up late nights
i staedy up waiting for you
i wished that you would show up
show up and give me the night 
show me I'm worth your time 
show me im in prime
i gave up my bouderiares
 i gave up my life stories
but now you came to my advice
you feel down begging
on your knees screaming
and i said
you can Cry on me 
my shoulder 
will be the soft pillow 
you where missing yea
I will hold you not to tight but enough not to let you go
I'm here for you
I'm here with you you

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

its not good but eh i gave it a try

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

@gabeyoungepic2008 wrote:

Does anyone like my poem My Poem shoutout to jaxs hold my hand but i dont feel anything touch me but i still dont feel anything say you love me and im a waterfall of feeling

can I extend this and make a verse outta it

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

i love ur poem sheesh

Timmyspu · Answer

It is a good poem but next time I would make sure the grammar is better and also make it a little bit longer because the one you did is a little short. It is really good poem for your first poem.

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

@timmyspu wrote:

It is a good poem but next time I would make sure the grammar is better and also make it a little bit longer because the one you did is a little short. It is really good poem for your first poem.

timmy boi gimme a break I just woke up

BrokenMoon · Answer

Low key just reminds me of how lonely I am RIP, but i like it!

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

It's good, but please PLEASE use better grammar. I would suggest some more lines as well?

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

It's good, but please PLEASE use better grammar. I would suggest some more lines as well?

OMGGGG I WASNT GOING FOR PERFECTIONN DANG IT. I AM TIRED AND I WROTE THAT WITHIN 7 minutes I WAS NOT TRYING TO MAKE IT REALLY GOOD. IF YALL WANT ME TO I WILL MAKE A BETTER VERSION THAT FLOWS BETTER

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

@theofficialdevan12 wrote:

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

It's good, but please PLEASE use better grammar. I would suggest some more lines as well?

OMGGGG I WASNT GOING FOR PERFECTIONN DANG IT. I AM TIRED AND I WROTE THAT WITHIN 7 minutes I WAS NOT TRYING TO MAKE IT REALLY GOOD. IF YALL WANT ME TO I WILL MAKE A BETTER VERSION THAT FLOWS BETTER

Thank you lmao

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

lol i was ragging right there but ill make better version

Jaxs · Answer

this has gone far lol