I need help with my poem. blue and the sea. I have so far. to the blue like the sea were sea shells belore. sand castles tore. like insignia on our shore. Any more to add?

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I need help with my poem. blue and the sea. I have so far. to the blue like the sea  were sea shells belore. sand castles tore. like insignia on our shore. Any more to add?

ryleycc · Answer

or to change?

Astrid1 · Answer

So is it-?

To the blue like the sea
Were sea shells before
Sand castles tore
Like insignia on our shore.

If so, sounds good to me but i'd add a sentence or two to level out the poem.

afflatedAnimism · Answer

I like it!! It's very original and creative!!

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

I like it! Just in your final poem, please use correct grammar. It was a bit difficult to read, but I enjoyed it.

chloeandkailee4life · Answer

i love it ,its amazing as much as u think it is!

Hannah2005 · Answer

nah, its really good

ryles · Answer

hi

MemphisLee · Answer

The sea is a place to adore and deep down in the sea there are treasures and more :) hope this helps

FABULOSA123 · Answer

I GOT U FAM IM A RAPER!!!!!

To the blue like the sea
Were sea shells before
Sand castles tore

i tend to snore
i am built like a bor 
i value the power and i never take a shower
smell she sweet must of my victory
together we will make history!!!!!!