hey, wrote something for my creative writing class and wanted to know on any idea about how i should approach this story plot line next, all advice helpful!

here it is.

His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting right across from him. Her eyes rimmed red with tears and her mouth forming into a small whimper as the genuine fear began to rise in her breathing.
The key comes to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose eyes go wide.
“No…” She breaths, looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” She panics.
Two large men step out of the darkness from behind her as he pushes herself out of her chair.
“You can’t!” she screams, noticing the men and trying to run away. To no avail, they grab her with force. Jasper sits there, watching as she tries to kick and scream her way out of their grasp.
“Please!” She yells desperately, “No, give me another chance!”
The blonde decides to kick one of the men, the loosened grasp on her giving her a chance to get away but not for long.

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hey, wrote something for my creative writing class and wanted to know on any idea about how i should approach this story plot line next, all advice helpful!

here it is.

His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting right across from him. Her eyes rimmed red with tears and her mouth forming into a small whimper as the genuine fear began to rise in her breathing.
The key comes to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose eyes go wide.
“No…” She breaths, looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” She panics. 
Two large men step out of the darkness from behind her as he pushes herself out of her chair.
“You can’t!” she screams, noticing the men and trying to run away. To no avail, they grab her with force. Jasper sits there, watching as she tries to kick and scream her way out of their grasp.
“Please!” She yells desperately, “No, give me another chance!” 
The blonde decides to kick one of the men, the loosened grasp on her giving her a chance to get away but not for long.

Lola12 · Answer

wow, this is really good

Lola12 · Answer

great job!

QueenNiyah · Answer

WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL*CRYING* BRAVO BRAVO

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

@queenniyah wrote:

WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL*CRYING* BRAVO BRAVO

HHSHSHSHH TYSM <3

Prettykitty89 · Answer

@queenniyah wrote:

WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL*CRYING* BRAVO BRAVO

why she crying for?

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

@lola12 wrote:

wow, this is really good

thanks!

QueenNiyah · Answer

i wasnt exaclty crying
yes it is that good
the word not good it awsome

Lola12 · Answer

np! You should keep up the great/awesome work!

QueenNiyah · Answer

fr

QueenNiyah · Answer

r u thinking about being a book writer

QueenNiyah · Answer

u should!!!!

Lola12 · Answer

definetly

QueenNiyah · Answer

y cant i post a  question

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

@queenniyah wrote:

r u thinking about being a book writer

I have! although I'm at a young age I've invested my time into thinking about it and starting by writing short stories and sharing them online. Thanks for the input, it really helps :D

QueenNiyah · Answer

COOL
also do u know y i can't like post a question

QueenNiyah · Answer

idk y i can;t post it

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

do you already have one open? cause if you do it wont let you also you might need to verify your email address

QueenNiyah · Answer

ok
thx

QueenNiyah · Answer

well can u put  the question there for me
plz

QueenNiyah · Answer

What a nickname for me

QueenNiyah · Answer

did u post it yet