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a poem about my ex who i loved so much, i was heart broken and thought it was good ig, very personal but lemme know if u like it! :]


Hi,
It’s been about two months since I've talked to you.
Since I've walked with you.
Since I’ve touched you, hugged you, held your hand in mine, met you by the stairs.
Since I've kissed you.
It’s been a hard four weeks to say the least. I try to avoid you in all ways possible but I can't. The amount of times I catch myself looking in your direction in class makes me want to punch myself in the gut over and over until I learn my lesson.
You left me. You didn’t want me anymore, you didn’t need me anymore.
I don’t know where it all went wrong, I felt so Cheeseing safe around you, so normal, so comfortable and i thought you felt the same. That Friday was the best day of my life. I got to hold hands with you, kiss you at the pep rally. Then the game, I made sure I looked my best, hung out with friends, your friends as I watched you march into the field then rushed down to greet you with a big hug in your uniform.
It was everything I've ever dreamed about in the past. Someone to call me miine, the amount of sleepless nights I had thinking I'll never find someone and just making up cases in my head for it to finally come true that one night with you.
I was in love with you L#####. Ya you, you with your little smile that would light up my heart. you.
And I didn’t know how much until you let me go.
A thing I've been doing is trying to look happy and excited whenever I'm in your presence, like me laughing with someone else will show you just how much I didn't need you or didn’t miss you.
It’s like me lying with my looks and attitude will prove to me and you that it’s fine.
Things should not be awkward but they have to be, i've kissed you, held you, touched you. There's no way I could go back to being just friends when I know full well I'm never going to lose the feelings for you.
You made me genuinely happy, you did, and all my friends noticed that.
I remember one day, it was after gym class and you were meeting with ur friends in the hall, your mask was off your face and i looked at you, looked at your perfectly tanned face, smooth jawline, bright smile, dark eyes, and thought to myself.
You’re so handsome.
You are and you always will be.
But now everytime i pass you in the halls, every time I make direct eye contact with you my heart quite literally speeds up and I hate it, making me think that the boyfriend I have now is nothing c

Answer 1

this isnt a poem

Answer 2

this is a whole book

Answer 3

lol i like this good job

Answer 4

compared to the impact you have on me without trying.
There's so much more I have to say but I can’t get the courage to type it out so I'm just going to leave myself alone with my thoughts.
Anyways, I hope you're well.
Goodbye.
-One of the girls that still love you.

Answer 5

im confused

Answer 6

Nice job :)

Answer 7

its a really good poem i like it C:<

Answer 8

omg is the persons name landon, tet ur the only snitch

Answer 9

keep up the good work

Answer 10

dat was rlly gud piece of writing, like a window to a diary entry of ur's, gj, it was rlly emotional and had neat imagery

Answer 11

Great short story

Answer 12

I thought you did good. Sorry for about your breakup.

Answer 13

i love this its exactly how i feel abt my ex

Answer 14

STOP this really made me hurt for you

Answer 15

i love this. i can relate to it so much. but hey it gets better. i mean it took me like 7 or 8 months to get over my ex but im doing so much better.