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ChrisGarcia16:

A small "poem" (not really) called, "The job of a Therapy Friend" (I am sorry if you can relate to such a topic.) I can sit and listen, here you talk about everything everyone did wrong. But you didn't know that after all this complaining, the repeating problems...it was you. You were the problem all along. I am tired of hearing about everyone's problems, and the hatred they held for others, the feeling I have is the feeling of being smothered. I have things in my life torturing my mind every day. But yet I have to come up with a response to your problems because I must put in a say. If not I am the bad friend, the one who is never there. But all these problems plus mine, it's all too much, I feel like I am drowning and I've been begging for air. I can't make your problems disappear, I must carry my responsibility and yours as well. Sometimes I just want to let it all out in a single yell. A cry of help from myself, because I am dealing with things alone, and I've never felt this immense feeling of confusion and emptiness. You left me with your problems to solve making my life more of a mess. But I put on a front because I am meant to be kind, right? I am meant to put up with everyone's problems, even if I can't stand another day, cause every day it's like another fight. A fight I will most likely lose but I am still here. But one day I might not be, that is my biggest fear. Who then will listen to you rant and vent? Will you just sit and endure your mind torment? But I will listen to you until the day I say goodbye. And I don't want you to lose this fight with your mind and lose your life. I just wished you saw my pain too, or maybe give me a moment of time to explain to you how I feel. Because what I've endured over the years was nothing to scoff at, the hurt and scars they left are real. But alas, I cannot tell you that, can I? Because I am meant to be the therapy friend, I am meant to be kind. I am meant to feel fine. -chris/bee

ItzDanger:

Oh dang, this actually hit me different. Good job, and keep it up. Dont give up writing, your amazing bee. -bayani

ChrisGarcia16:

@itzdanger wrote:
Oh dang, this actually hit me different. Good job, and keep it up. Dont give up writing, your amazing bee. -bayani
Thank you, and dw, I won't give up on what I enjoy. And I am sorry you can relate to this. But know you aren't alone. -chris/bee

ItzDanger:

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
Oh dang, this actually hit me different. Good job, and keep it up. Dont give up writing, your amazing bee. -bayani
Thank you, and dw, I won't give up on what I enjoy. And I am sorry you can relate to this. But know you aren't alone. -chris/bee
Ofc lol

Littleonehehe:

Why this is beautiful it fills me if joy and sadness I can relate to what you mean. Like stars in the sky's we all eventually explode into a beautiful supernova :]

Littleonehehe:

I love the poem <3

Littleonehehe:

@littleonehehe wrote:
Why this is beautiful it fills me withjoy and sadness I can relate to what you mean. Like stars in the sky's we all eventually explode into a beautiful supernova :]

ChrisGarcia16:

@littleonehehe wrote:
Why this is beautiful it fills me if joy and sadness I can relate to what you mean. Like stars in the sky's we all eventually explode into a beautiful supernova :]
It's bittersweet knowing others like this small writing of mine, I like people can relate, but it's not a good thing to be relating to. But thank you kindly for the compliments <3 -chris/bee

iwantarveal:

wohats how i feel yk definitley i love it ah you needa keep going ur goodlike real good idk why that jus made me feel like it helped meopen my eyes lil and realize thats how i feel yk

Astrid1:

It's amazing. Your rhyming scheme is *chef kiss* amazing. A lot of people can relate to this, and it's quite sad. You're very talented. Can't wait to read more of your works.

Brycen17803:

Holy cow that's amazing!!!👏👏

Sharkattack123:

This is good, keep it up

ChrisGarcia16:

@iwantarveal wrote:
wohats how i feel yk definitley i love it ah you needa keep going ur goodlike real good idk why that jus made me feel like it helped meopen my eyes lil and realize thats how i feel yk
Thank you so much <3 And I am glad it made you open your eyes a bit about yourself <3 -chris/bee

ChrisGarcia16:

@astrid1 wrote:
It's amazing. Your rhyming scheme is *chef kiss* amazing. A lot of people can relate to this, and it's quite sad. You're very talented. Can't wait to read more of your works.
Thank you :] Your kind words and compliments mean so much to me <333 -chris/bee

ChrisGarcia16:

@brycen17803 wrote:
Holy cow that's amazing!!!👏👏
Thank you :] -chris/bee

ChrisGarcia16:

@sharkattack123 wrote:
This is good, keep it up
Thank you, I will :D -chris/bee

Sharkattack123:

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:
@sharkattack123 wrote:
This is good, keep it up
Thank you, I will :D -chris/bee
Yuh🥲

letsnot:

@ChrisGarcia16 wow this actually is amazing... i like how you wrote it all out... fr fr...

ChrisGarcia16:

@letsnot wrote:
@ChrisGarcia16 wow this actually is amazing... i like how you wrote it all out... fr fr...
Thank you <3 -chris/bee

curlyheadbella:

This is really good

ChrisGarcia16:

@curlyheadbella wrote:
This is really good
thank you :] -chris/bee

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