Question

The waves of the ocean fell onto each other as the sun slowly dimmed and yet I couldn't seem to find even a small glimpse of the moon ahead. Instead, the sun fell down before me and there was no moon, no night, just the shining sunset. Even so, I still saw small specks of stars in the sky slowly starting to appear. I wondered and wished to ask what was happening if I knew what to say but my mouth stayed closed. I was not in shock or disbelief, instead I felt relieved. The darkness of the night sky had always made me have this sort of feeling I couldn't explain. The ocean, still making the same waves as it had before, called out my name. Suddenly, I felt the urge to dive into the water peacefully without hesitation. There was nobody beside me seeing or experiencing this phenomenon as I was, so I suppose I was free to do as I wish. I dived into the ocean, feeling the cold water seep onto my skin. I felt as if I could never drown in those waters nor feel as if my eyes or nose were irritated from the water going into them. I just felt calm. It felt as if nothing, nobody could get in my way of doing this. I could see the sea animals swim alongside me. I’d been wanting to do this for the longest time but I had been too nervous or too scared, but this time I didn't feel scared or nervous or anything. I felt confident. It felt like I could do anything in the entire world and not fail a single time.


English poem thingy- is it good ?

Answer 1

Nice

Answer 2

love it

Answer 3

Yes.
you should publish it.

Answer 4

Some of the sentences r a bit wordy, but other den dat I think ish rlly lovely and chu did a gr8 job !!!!!

Answer 5

It's just a rough draft of my poem, I have to, at some point, go through and fix it all up.

Answer 6

Your piece is beautifully written and captures a sense of wonder and calmness as the narrator experiences the ocean and the night sky. The imagery of the waves falling onto each other and the specks of stars starting to appear in the sky is vivid and evocative.

The idea of feeling relieved by the absence of the moon and the darkness of the night sky is an interesting and unique perspective, and it adds depth to the narrator's character.

The line "The ocean, still making the same waves as it had before, called out my name" is particularly striking and captures a sense of connection and belonging to the natural world.

Overall, your piece is well-written and engaging, and it conveys a sense of freedom and confidence that is inspiring. Great job!

Answer 7

nicee

Answer 8

ai is crazyy

Answer 9

bro your pf is crazy

Answer 10

I also can't type so here's a quick edit of what I just messed up.

*genuinely
*instead
*for a bit

Answer 11

Ur goof girlA

Answer 12

Girl*