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Hi guys! Been a while but here's a poem I recently wrote called Broken. Hope you like it!

Broken.
That's what they keep telling me.
I try to ignore it, just another burden to society.
All day, all night
I wonder what the hell is wrong with me.
Fighting these thoughts in my head,
All those insults do nothing to soothe this dread.
It'll never goes away
A never-ending nightmare I keep living.
I kick, I scream.
Can't seem to walk away.
But I keep going to see another day.
I can't be a failure.
I don't want to let you down.
But no matter what I do
I can't make you proud.
I'll never be good enough.
You know it's that bad, when you start to believe them.
And I guess I never stopped.
Wish someone woulda told me,
That this world is too damn cruel,
Because I really hate being used.
It's not the best feeling
It'll cut you like a knife
And in the end, it'll leave you paralyzed.
Stuck, unable to think, unable to feel.
Unable to tell if happiness is even real.
But that's just what it is.
I just hate having to live with it.

Answer 1

I can absolutely feel the pain in this. I absolutely loved this, keep up the great work!!

Answer 2

Your words say a lot as of showing feelings, thank you for sharing such deep and personal words.

Answer 3

thts how i feel

Answer 4

but its w relationships

Answer 5

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