"Broken"
Your presence was what I wanted,
The broken light was near,
The only thing I ever wanted was you,
I can see the blue sky,
The building that is now broken,
You were my everything,
But all I feel now is broken,
You left me in tears,
Feeling useless,
Feeling unwelcomed,
Or unwanted,
You are the one that deserves nothing,
You sound see the broken pieces,
Not use 5,
The broken lies,
You are nothing.

Question

"Broken" 
Your presence was what I wanted, 
The broken light was near,
The only thing I ever wanted was you, 
I can see the blue sky,
The building that is now broken,
You were my everything,
But all I feel now is broken,
You left me in tears,
Feeling useless,
Feeling unwelcomed,
Or unwanted,
You are the one that deserves nothing,
You sound see the broken pieces,
Not use 5,
The broken lies,
You are nothing.

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

I meant should***

Dolphan · Answer

I can feel the pain and tension in this poem. Wonderful job!!

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

I can feel the pain and tension in this poem. Wonderful job!!

I just hate lairs

Leir · Answer

It's so good, you should write more.

MaxyDaKid · Answer

beautiful writing-

OopsSorry1 · Answer

wow, that is really beautiful

OLIVER69 · Answer

I honestly have no words. It is extremely relatable. Which is something i find extremely good in a poem. I say, 'If the poem is relatable to the viewer, than you have a chance at greatness.' Keep up the GREAT work.

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

I honestly have no words. It is extremely relatable. Which is something i find extremely good in a poem. I say, 'If the poem is relatable to the viewer, than you have a chance at greatness.' Keep up the GREAT work.

It's sad that I feel sad