Hello, I just want an Honest opinion on two stories I made. Thanks.

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hannahj · Answer

yesss

Howdy1 · Answer

give me a moment to add it here

Howdy1 · Answer

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StrawberryGoddess · Answer

Amazing!!!!

Howdy1 · Answer

I am still working on this story I made.

Howdy1 · Answer

@spectrum

YourlocalRandom2000 · Answer

Ooou thats a great storyyy

Howdy1 · Answer

Thank you

Howdy1 · Answer

which one was your favourite?

Howdy1 · Answer

@luhivqqcherry

Howdy1 · Answer

@spectrum

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@howdy1 wrote:

which one was your favourite?

my favourite was the dark vampiree one

Howdy1 · Answer

@subtonic7

Subtonic7 · Answer

Yuh

@howdy1 wrote:

@subtonic7

Howdy1 · Answer

here are my stories

Subtonic7 · Answer

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

Subtonic7 · Answer

sorry pal

hannahj · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

Subtonic7 · Answer

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

hannahj · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

oop thats to bad

Subtonic7 · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

oop thats to bad

Speaking of reading whats ur fav harry potter mines is last one

hannahj · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

oop thats to bad

Speaking of reading whats ur fav harry potter mines is last one

I don't read Harry Potter I only read Diary of a Wimpy Kid :)

Subtonic7 · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Used to its funny lol

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

oop thats to bad

Speaking of reading whats ur fav harry potter mines is last one

I don't read Harry Potter I only read Diary of a Wimpy Kid :)

hannahj · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Used to its funny lol

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

Im dumb

@hannahj wrote:

@subtonic7 wrote:

@howdy1 wrote:

here are my stories

unfortunetly, i can't read

why can't you read?

oop thats to bad

Speaking of reading whats ur fav harry potter mines is last one

I don't read Harry Potter I only read Diary of a Wimpy Kid :)

yahhh fs

Subtonic7 · Answer

anyway i dont read

hannahj · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

anyway i dont read

yes you have made that pretty clear

HotPockets14 · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

anyway i dont read

anyway how was the harry potter books never read them

Howdy1 · Answer

@p1n3appl31

P1n3appl31 · Answer

Just finished the first one, you have a great plot and image here but your wording could be better, especially with some of the timing.

P1n3appl31 · Answer

Finished the second one, and it's a great story, worded well, but it feels like a monologue as the story and then you start somewhere else that seems irrelevant.

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