Im Writing a story What y'all think so far?
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(Idk what 2 call it yet)
In the magnificent Fire Kingdom, where the sky blazed with hues of red and orange, lived Princess Raven - a fierce and beautiful young woman with long black hair that shimmered in the sunlight. Her eyes were the color of blazing fire, and her wide red wings sparkled like flames in the night sky. She was known throughout the kingdom for her bravery and kindness, beloved by her people and feared by her enemies.

Raven ruled the Fire Kingdom with grace and strength, always clad in a red mini-dress that accentuated her curves and highlighted her striking features. She rode into battle on the back of her magnificent black horse, a creature as dark as the night sky with eyes that gleamed with intelligence and loyalty. At her side, she had a fierce pet dragon, whose scales shimmered like rubies in the sun.

Prince Blaze, the handsome and gallant heir to the throne, was Raven's closest companion and confidant. His fiery red hair matched the intensity of his personality, and his wide black wings lifted him high above the kingdom, a symbol of his power and strength. Blaze was never without his long sword, encrusted with precious rubies that glinted in the sunlight, a weapon he wielded with skill and precision. He also had a loyal black wolf, whose piercing eyes mirrored his master's fierce determination.

But not all in the Fire Kingdom were allies to Raven and Blaze. Deep within the shadowy forests that bordered the kingdom, dwelled Nightmare - the enigmatic and mysterious witch who held a dark power over the land. She was a creature of seductive beauty, with long curly black hair and eyes as black as the void. Nightmare always wore a black pointy hat that added to her aura of mystery, and her attire consisted of a short black dress that revealed tantalizing glimpses of her pale skin, accompanied by a long black coat that billowed around her like the wings of a raven. She rode through the night sky on a broomstick, her tiny black bat fluttering at her side.

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Im Writing a story What y'all think so far?
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(Idk what 2 call it yet) 
In the magnificent Fire Kingdom, where the sky blazed with hues of red and orange, lived Princess Raven - a fierce and beautiful young woman with long black hair that shimmered in the sunlight. Her eyes were the color of blazing fire, and her wide red wings sparkled like flames in the night sky. She was known throughout the kingdom for her bravery and kindness, beloved by her people and feared by her enemies.

Raven ruled the Fire Kingdom with grace and strength, always clad in a red mini-dress that accentuated her curves and highlighted her striking features. She rode into battle on the back of her magnificent black horse, a creature as dark as the night sky with eyes that gleamed with intelligence and loyalty. At her side, she had a fierce pet dragon, whose scales shimmered like rubies in the sun.

Prince Blaze, the handsome and gallant heir to the throne, was Raven's closest companion and confidant. His fiery red hair matched the intensity of his personality, and his wide black wings lifted him high above the kingdom, a symbol of his power and strength. Blaze was never without his long sword, encrusted with precious rubies that glinted in the sunlight, a weapon he wielded with skill and precision. He also had a loyal black wolf, whose piercing eyes mirrored his master's fierce determination.

But not all in the Fire Kingdom were allies to Raven and Blaze. Deep within the shadowy forests that bordered the kingdom, dwelled Nightmare - the enigmatic and mysterious witch who held a dark power over the land. She was a creature of seductive beauty, with long curly black hair and eyes as black as the void. Nightmare always wore a black pointy hat that added to her aura of mystery, and her attire consisted of a short black dress that revealed tantalizing glimpses of her pale skin, accompanied by a long black coat that billowed around her like the wings of a raven. She rode through the night sky on a broomstick, her tiny black bat fluttering at her side.

Rosee5656 · Answer

Oooo it goodd

Rosee5656 · Answer

keep it goin!

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

@rosee5656 wrote:

keep it goin!

thx ^ ^

Rosee5656 · Answer

ofcc

hellokitty265 · Answer

cool

persephone · Answer

Shadow Kingdom(that should be the name of the book)

persephone · Answer

I think it may have a little too much description, later on in the book is normally the best option but other than that it is really good.

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

@persephone wrote:

I think it may have a little too much description, later on in the book is normally the best option but other than that it is really good.

Tysm

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

@persephone wrote:

Shadow Kingdom(that should be the name of the book)

And bet That's what i'll call it