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forgetmylife:

Sorrow In a never ending battle for life, No one seems to know how I feel, Lost and all alone and on my own, No one hears my screams or cries, No one sees the tears that run down my face, No one heard my sorrow, No one ever knows if I'm hurting or not, My sorrows hidden behind my mask I put on, No one sees the real me, No ones stops me and said tell me the truth, When I act like everything is fine, When it's not, My life is full of darkness and sorrow, No on sees the pain in my eyes.

forgetmylife:

Let me know if it’s good

MAGABACK:

I think itz great. gj

YouInFocus:

That sounds really deep i mean it is tough to have this feeling of being alone and hidden and it's a really good poem overall. you definitely hit the nail when you capture those feelings of loneliness and sorrow so well. and i can relate to this i think we all do to be honest.

forgetmylife:

@magaback wrote:
I think itz great. gj
Thank you 🙏🏾

MAGABACK:

@forgetmylife wrote:
@magaback wrote:
I think itz great. gj
Thank you 🙏🏾
np. :)

forgetmylife:

@youinfocus wrote:
That sounds really deep i mean it is tough to have this feeling of being alone and hidden and it's a really good poem overall. you definitely hit the nail when you capture those feelings of loneliness and sorrow so well. and i can relate to this i think we all do to be honest.
Thank you and yeah just remember you’re not alone

YouInFocus:

@forgetmylife wrote:
@youinfocus wrote:
That sounds really deep i mean it is tough to have this feeling of being alone and hidden and it's a really good poem overall. you definitely hit the nail when you capture those feelings of loneliness and sorrow so well. and i can relate to this i think we all do to be honest.
Thank you and yeah just remember you’re not alone
Yeah For sure! and your welcome and keep writing poems it really helps me so much to process my feelings and cope so keep it up. :)

Breathless:

Who the Diddly darn are you-

Breathless:

AND Good job Nas!

Breathless:

Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!

uknownprttyfacekayla:

Good job nas

uknownprttyfacekayla:

Keep up the great work 🙏🏻

Breathless:

you just repeated me Abby ?w?

uknownprttyfacekayla:

Uh no?

Breathless:

am joking TwT

Breathless:

Silly goose

uknownprttyfacekayla:

You said good I said great besides I didn’t even see that you responded 🤷🏾♀️🤌🏾

Breathless:

?w?

Fortish:

Lovely, just lovely.. Thats life for you :')

2hrs:

on the skbidi !

Bones:

It's good, gk

NaiNoah:

tuff

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