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Marvelsbookgirl:

Hope you guys liked this. tell me what you think. I'm new to writing poems. Dear you know who. I miss you funny I know i said i would wouldn't I guess thats not how I roll I'm srry i bothered you. im srry i was a burrden But i guesss your happy now But as always, I'm still hurtin We said we'd be together forever. we'd said we'd grow up, and be in love I thought we'd be together through it all but then reality gave me a shove. It would never had worked espesially when you thought u had the advantage like if u looked away she'd vanish. But i guess i will always be hurt. The pain never diminishes, it just subsides cause when i look at you my heart goes wild. like giving candy to a child So like i said, the pain abides so once again i'm srry. for all the trouble, I guess i Just look away i know i'm a mess juts forget me, just like dorry. sicerly Your frogotten love

kristen000021:

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Sleepyman:

type its good

Hollekitty1234:

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krissy2025:

wrd

ykbatman:

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Marvelsbookgirl:

@ykbatman wrote:
and you'll be successful frl
thk u sm

NaiNoah:

aye this is good

Marvelsbookgirl:

@nainoah wrote:
aye this is good
thk you

marienne:

this is good

marienne:

love it

euphoriiic:

gjj

Kay06:

I love it, its so deep and emotional. Idlove to see more of your work

MysticEcho:

terrible

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