Question

Hope you guys liked this. tell me what you think. I'm new to writing poems.

Dear you know who.

I miss you
funny I know
i said i would wouldn't
I guess thats not how I roll

I'm srry i bothered you.
im srry i was a burrden
But i guesss your happy now
But as always, I'm still hurtin

We said we'd be together forever.
we'd said we'd grow up, and be in love
I thought we'd be together through it all
but then reality gave me a shove.

It would never had worked
espesially when you thought u had the advantage
like if u looked away she'd vanish.
But i guess i will always be hurt.

The pain never diminishes, it just subsides
cause when i look at you my heart goes wild.
like giving candy to a child
So like i said, the pain abides

so once again i'm srry.
for all the trouble, I guess
i Just look away i know i'm a mess
juts forget me, just like dorry.

sicerly Your frogotten love

Answer 1

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Answer 2

type its good

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Answer 4

wrd

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Answer 6

keep making poems

Answer 7

and you'll be successful frl

Answer 8

aye this is good

Answer 9

this is good

Answer 10

love it

Answer 11

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Answer 12

I love it, its so deep and emotional. Idlove to see more of your work

Answer 13

terrible