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JuneTheAssasin2923:

Can someone help me with a book I'm writing. I am not very good with details. Can someone give me an example of a scene that is very descriptive

krissy2025:

i cannnnn

JuneTheAssasin2923:

@krissy2025 wrote:
i cannnnn
Great.

JuneTheAssasin2923:

I need help writing a fight scene

krissy2025:

"He snarled and pulled his arm back to swing the knife. As the blade swept toward me, I stepped in close to his body, so when I turned my right shoulder brushed his chest. Using the edges of my opened hands, I struck his upper and lower arm."

JuneTheAssasin2923:

@krissy2025 wrote:
"He snarled and pulled his arm back to swing the knife. As the blade swept toward me, I stepped in close to his body, so when I turned my right shoulder brushed his chest. Using the edges of my opened hands, I struck his upper and lower arm."
thanks I will use this as an example

GoatyGoat:

Ight

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