roses are dead
violets are dying
outside I'm smiling
inside I'm crying
My belt loosens slowly.
Reminders of you stay fresh
in murky ponds of suffocating tadpoles
Wake me in the morning,
when the sun shines again
It's frightening when all I know
falls apart
And all I know is you
Hunger squeezes me tighter
My soul sags with exhaustion
Ashtrays fill with sleepless nights
Weeping intensifies my anxiety
Can tomorrow come without you
here today
The cheap chandelier falls on my face
The rose filled lamp explodes in my hands
Pain is unrecognizable.
All I knew was you
You
My love

Question

roses are dead
violets are dying 
outside I'm smiling
 inside I'm crying 
My belt loosens slowly.
Reminders of you stay fresh
in murky ponds of suffocating tadpoles
Wake me in the morning,
when the sun shines again
It's frightening when all I know
falls apart
And all I know is you
Hunger squeezes me tighter
My soul sags with exhaustion
Ashtrays fill with sleepless nights
Weeping intensifies my anxiety
Can tomorrow come without you
here today
The cheap chandelier falls on my face
The rose filled lamp explodes in my hands
Pain is unrecognizable.
All I knew was you
You
My love

2hrs · Answer

6/10 not giving what its supposed to be giving DID U AI THIS!?

korbie · Answer

@2hrs wrote:

6/10 not giving what its supposed to be giving DID U AI THIS!?

no I didn't fr, I'm jus like juice, all this right of the dome

Nitrox · Answer

this poem has persuaded me that maybe life isn’t worth living anymore thank you my dearest acquaintance sir !

korbie · Answer

@nitrox wrote:

this poem has persuaded me that maybe life isn’t worth living anymore thank you my dearest acquaintance sir !

your welcome ms NITROX, that was the goal for the most part

theydontknowally · Answer

I like the last part, good job korkor

korbie · Answer

@theydontknowally wrote:

I like the last part, good job korkor

thank you ally <3

Cloud4444 · Answer

It’s definitely something……

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

Fearless101 · Answer

Keep up the good word i love juice u make music ?

korbie · Answer

@fearless101 wrote:

Keep up the good word i love juice u make music ?

sometimes, buh ian got no one to play the beat n stuff, like I got lyrics, buh no beat to match it or nun

Cloud4444 · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

Fearless101 · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

how do you train

Cloud4444 · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

U sound like Shadow 😭🙏

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

U sound like Shadow 😭🙏

chill I am not the *insert nerd emoji* I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

Cloud4444 · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

U sound like Shadow 😭🙏

chill I am not the *insert nerd emoji* I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

Could you not find the emoji ☠️ cus it’s right here 🤓

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

U sound like Shadow 😭🙏

chill I am not the *insert nerd emoji* I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

Could you not find the emoji ☠️ cus it’s right here 🤓

I'm on cb bruh, its so much more work looking for it

korbie · Answer

@fearless101 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

how do you train

korbie · Answer

I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

Cloud4444 · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@cloud4444 wrote:

It’s definitely something……

bro doesn't like my poem *sigh*

😭 it’s an amazing poem ig ( questioning myself 😭 not the poem)

ah dw, don't question yourself, I trained a lot to be like juice wrld, so this stuff comes out of the top of my head, I'm not skilled I jus say what's on my mind, your very talented yourself, don't compare yourself to others, for that only brings yourself down

U sound like Shadow 😭🙏

chill I am not the *insert nerd emoji* I jus practice a lot in my free time, like freestyling stuff and matching words that rhyme, until I'm able to put it all together

Could you not find the emoji ☠️ cus it’s right here 🤓

I'm on cb bruh, its so much more work looking for it

Okay 🙏😭🙏

YoursTruly1234 · Answer

This poem is okay. it’s very negative but it’s good 6/10