Question

(Please Rate my poem Truthfully)
I miss the days when we played until the last bit of sunlight, and when the whole town kids was on top bikes, When we played hide and seek and the first 1 found always knew were to peak, when we all sat on skateboards and bombed the steep streets, I miss when we traced each other on are sidewalks with chalk and built toy guns out of big Lego blocks, I miss when my parents forced me to come back inside n when I always threw a fit and even cried. I miss when we were all outside and not sitting in the house using up the WiFi!