(part 2 of the " im sorry" poem ) I hate the words “I'm sorry “ But why oh why I could never know. Why I miss them so I hear people say these words as I pass Never understanding but needing that The words echo in my mind. Like a never-ending whisper That ignites with light Im sorry Never fight, always a flight Your tears stain my heart Like hands that push and pull on my hair at night. The hands are always there. Never leaving until despair. In a way, they help though They get me through times, I can't bear. Your eyes hold a depth like an endless ocean One filled with hate and lies. The “I love you “ and “I hate you “ always rhyme. Like Time, they never pass through softly. There's always an ending, i could never see My heart aches with every tear I see you cry but I can't care. And I want to, even though I'm afraid of you I'm afraid of being broken too Idon'tt wanna feel that way again. I felt it once The day she left was like a never-ending jumpscare The words “I'm sorry “ replay in my mind Like a never-ending loop That I can never escape Those words never leave my head Like a blade never left my chest The day those words were said My heart broke like a tiny song note Forgotten and never played, and never seen I wish I were seen I want to be heard and played Like notes a singer loves but never complains I wanna remember how to love How to smile and how to care But those words echo always drawing near So I stay quite because I fear I could never escape if I went too deep time never ends and never replays And im scared “I'm sorry “ I never want to hear If I hear them again I'm going to cry Cry my heart to the small beats in my mind That fit into a box like my life I can fit my life into a box and pack it up nicely with a ribbon and set it there for someone to find But my life's shattered and scarred Never to be repaired I fear I want to smile and laugh but never can I want to learn how, and maybe can Because you never know what lies in the sand The words “I'm sorry “can't disappear But I can make my heart beat once again All it takes is time and I'll give it that. Because if I'm broken I can't be there for others. And for myself, I need to get better. “I'm sorry “ are words I no longer fear I can say them without crying or breaking at any moment Instead I can laugh and care like I did before “I'm sorry, “ now sounds like music Those notes that were forgotten reappear And I'm no longer scared
this is deep n good.
🔥 ❤️ This poem is lovely, @jinxthelovely !! ❤️❤️
this is really good, I like how at the end it became brighter and more confident. good job jinx
wow this is really a lovely poem
Goodjobb
amazing lwky.
That's deep like very deep feelings it made me cry for a little bit but Super-Amazing Job of this poem You should make a part 3 to end it more strongly
Simply beautiful
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