Question

yo chat i'm writing another song I need some feedback on the lyrics.

Drifting feeling the remedy
can't see into the infinity
we are fighting,a war that can't be won
can't you see that there's more
all this time I knew we we were meant to be
don't you want to stay her with me

Answer 1

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Answer 2

I would add a few more lines to it, and give it a bit more context. but overall, very nice

Answer 3

I think you should make this the chorus of your song

Answer 4

Lyrics are good btw

Answer 5

But, you should revise the spelling, grammar, and punctuation