Question

His ABC's.

A is for how attractive you were.
B is for how you went behind my back.
C is for how claustrophobic you made me
D is for how da** irritating you were.
E is for how you were my everything.
G is for the other girls
H is for how you betrayed me like Hamlet did
I is for I am not okay
J is for how jammed up we were
K is for your responses
L is for how I loved you
M is for how I thought we were monopoly
N is for no, which you seemed to not know
O is for okay, my response when I finally gave in
P is for please, please stay here with me
Q is for quitting, like you finally did
R is for our reactions
S is for Wizardty, how you often made me feel
T is for trying, though I didn't do too good
U is for how you spelled out "i love u"
V is for very, very in love
W is for why? why did you go
X is for xtra, how you said i was.
Y is for yes, you said yes to me
Z is for zero, zero promises you kept.

Answer 1

this poem or maybe song? is really nice, but here's some criticism. or things i think you should change about it. some of the letter lines are a little generic. push for more original and unique ideas about your relationship, and a few lines are a little confusing and awkward. the best type of abc poems have some type of rhythm. like some of your lines are strong others are not. try and give your lines a more similar structure so they can flow better. the emotional poem jumps from pain, nostalgia, and accusations. if you would give it a more better structured emotional journey it flow wayy better! (and the hamlet thing you should change because hamlet is betrayed more often).