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EdwinJsHispanic:

( to that person who hurt me bad) I hate you so much I cannot even explain it. You had that trust that I gave you and just threw it on the ground like I didnt build up that trust. You expect me to forgive you but for what?, all those little promises turned out to be a lie all because you cant keep a damn promise.

Twaylor:

what is this supposed to be? a vent or poem

EdwinJsHispanic:

both

nena:

@edwinjshispanic wrote:
both
its really good, I think that if you want it to sound more like a poem, you could as a few rymes, or you could separate it by lines, but it sounds like you need someone to talk to, lmk budski

EdwinJsHispanic:

ty for the feedback, i will try to improve

nena:

@edwinjshispanic wrote:
ty for the feedback, i will try to improve
frick yeah, just don't lose hope

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