Question

Nobody cared

nobody even tried

And you were oh so scared

more scared than you have ever been

helpless against this mans sin

With no-one to go to

Noone to help you get through

You did it all on ur own

You kept me safe

You were my mom and my stone

You me the love you never had

Gave me what you hadnt known

You were my mom and my dad

You gave me everything you could

Yet still i wasnt ok

You did all in your power to make my life good

You came from the depths of despair

You made a choice

And you were always there

You did what your mom never did

You took control

Cuz your no lo

Answer 1

You did what your mom never did

You took control

Cuz your no longer a kid

They cant hurt you

You rose up and began to soar

You loved me with everything you had

From the begining you swore

That we'd get what you werent given

Someone to understand and care

Someone to tell you all was forgiven

Your heart is bigger than you know

You will give everything you have and expect nothing in return

To this day it continues to grow!

Mommy im so thankful and glad i have you here

You rose me right

and i take for granted how much you endear

You will always be the person you are

the good the bad and the painful

but you carry around ur past like a proud scar

Your not afraid to be you

you dont wanna be anyone else

Your not scared of what you've been through

I want to be that brave

I want to not be afraid

I want to be able to save

from the dark and the frightening

To run away and give your fears a mere wave

Dont ever put youself down

Mom you are one of the most beautiful honest good hearted people out there

Because its obvious your one of the best kind of people around

Without a doubt im glad your my mother

We may have our quarells

But there can never be another mom for me out there

Answer 2

What do u guys think? :) i wrote it for my mom for mothers day pls comment your opinion!! :)

Answer 3

your= you're or you are

Answer 4

where does it say that?

Answer 5

rose= raise or raised

Answer 6

3rd line

Answer 7

ahhhhhh i see it alright thx anythig else tht can be changed? :)

Answer 8

still looking :)

Answer 9

endear=endure

Answer 10

wow that is amazing

Answer 11

it is? xD i thought i could of done better!! u like it? YAY!!!!

Answer 12

yep. i really like it

Answer 13

xD!! yay!!! :)

Answer 14

i wish i had the same talent like you do

Answer 15

It's excellent. What do you mean by "To run away and give your fears a mere wave?"

Answer 16

im sure you could write something so beautiful it hurts to read it lol all u gotta have is passion. without it you cant rite a good poem!! i always play music that gives me the emotion i want to write a poem about!! u should try! :)

Answer 17

ok i will

Answer 18

I meant that she left her mom and dad to come live in wasington bc she was always scared as a kid her...step-dad was abusive :(

Answer 19

aww this is BEAUTIFUL wish i could say the same thing about my mom

Answer 20

How about you write about something that has helped her face her fears or what she has done to overcome them.

Answer 21

What do u think that was?!? u have to dig deeper.. its usually like that with finding the meaning/story behind poems :) u would seriously have to know her all your life to understand it but hearing its great from people who dont even know my mom is... amazing that i could've wrote this :) and makes me feel good!! :D

Answer 22

Remember no matter how a cruel a mom might, at the end she will be the only one you go to and cry in her lap.

Answer 23

i agree with you

Answer 24

You guys are lucky to have mom. Don't let anything ruin the bond :) Next thing you know they might be gone and you'll never see them again.

Answer 25

ik she will always be that for me nomatter what. i love her with all my heart and i wouldnt trade her for the world :) she has been through so much and she raised me and my sister all on her own. when she first realized she was pregnant with me she decided to stop smoking to go to college and to quit drinking. it makes me feel good she did it all for me =3

Answer 26

the same thing happen with my best friend

Answer 27

rly? lol she got pregnant at 21 and i was the accident child ^_^ but i wouldnt have it any other way :)

Answer 28

same story

Answer 29

i love this poem

Answer 30

awww thx olivia :)