Question

Here is a new poem of mine.... "Passage to my Heart" Not my best but tell me what you think!! (:
post it in a comment

Answer 1

Passage to my Heart
Electric, sending shocks through me
Eyes so intense, hear me plea!
Why must you try so hard
To push me away, put up a guard
I just want to know who you are
I want to know every blemish every scar
But you wont let me in your heart
I only have your words of art
I tried, kept you coming
but your words are mind numbing
This game we play
Those things they say
Are they truly real?
Is that how you feel?
Tell me, am I someone you can trust?
I feel all we have is lust
I want so much more
Than to be seen as a whore
I am not this word i spoke
My pride wont be broke
I am me, heart and soul
I wont be some lustful goal
I want to be loved for who i am
Not just my body god damn!!
This world we live in today
Our morals are all astray
Thinking its okay, to hurt to please
Sure, i can be a tease
Sorry but i just cant be tied down
Try, in the fog you will drown
I will send you out, to get lost
like a toy, you'll be tossed
I wont let you put me on a string
You are MY plaything
So unless you can show your true self
You'll be stored away, put on the shelf
To cage me, capture my heart, my mind
Be my eyes to see when i am blind
Always be there giving everything i need
All of my pleas, you must heed
Only speak what you mean
Treat me like a queen
If you can somehow manage all this
Then luck will first grant you my kiss
If you never leave my side
I will no longer hide
My heart will be yours
To open my locked doors
Are you good enough?
Because i may just call your bluff
My love clearly is hard to earn
But my passion will burn
Well good luck now
Chow!

Answer 2

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:D:D:D

Answer 3

Thanks!!! haha i was told its not my best ^^

Answer 4

I know but I liked it a lot:D. I love how you rhymed who I am with god damn:P Great:D

Answer 5

Haha ^_^ yea one of my favorite cussing rhymes ^^ i wonder if the one called Desire is appropriate for openstudy :P

Answer 6

Lmao, I bet it would be, it's not thaaat bad:P

Answer 7

Desire
Oh god, I want you so much

MMM.. I wanna feel your touch...

I need you! Remove the disguise!

I just must have, one look in your eyes

I want to feel you kiss my lips

I want to feel you hold my hips..

Oh why cant you be all mine?

I need to climb you like a vine

I must feel you touch my breast

I'd love to fall asleep on your chest.

Now just 1 thing i want to know

What are the lengths your willing to go?

To make me feel good, inside and out

To make me moan, maybe shout

Touch me, lick me, make me feel good?

Would you do what you should?

Come on, give me all you've got

Make my body get so hot.

I know you want me, you know its true.

But clearly the decision's up to you...

Answer 8

its kinda erotic :P but yea ^^

Answer 9

good one